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Drabble: The Spectrum of Desire

Oct 19, 2010 23:56

Title: The Spectrum of Desire
Author: dexstarr
Word Count: 200
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: femslash100 Challenge #256: Middle; quill_it 50 Fics Table: #1: Patience
Characters: Astoria Greengrass, Narcissa Malfoy
Warnings: Hint of femslash
Author's Note: A companion piece to " Green Tea." Thanks to J. for reading, and deirdre-aithne and illusionrain keeping me sane while I fought with this. And yeah I ( Read more... )

pairing: narcissa/astoria, community: femslash100, challenge: quill_it 50 fics, length: drabble (100-500), year: 2010, warning: femmeslash, fic, rating: pg-13, character: narcissa (black) malfoy, character: astoria (greengrass) malfoy

Comments 16

deirdre_aithne October 20 2010, 14:30:45 UTC

O_O *glomps the fic as well as you* That is just amazing! What a lovely Slytherin Narcissa can be, waiting and watching while Astoria is left to squirm a bit.

dexstarr October 21 2010, 00:53:40 UTC

Thanks! Was worth the agony of it, I think, I rather like how it turned out.

And squirming anticipation is delicious. :D

prudence_3 October 21 2010, 01:43:00 UTC

*snickers* oh naughty Narcissa. I do so love thee.

I really like that analogy with fire and degrees of desire. Beautifully worded.

dexstarr October 26 2010, 05:29:20 UTC

Ack thought I replied to this!

Thanks! I rather like naughty Narcissa too :D