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Drabble: The Spectrum of Desire

Oct 19, 2010 23:56

Title: The Spectrum of Desire
Author: dexstarr
Word Count: 200
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: femslash100 Challenge #256: Middle; quill_it 50 Fics Table: #1: Patience
Characters: Astoria Greengrass, Narcissa Malfoy
Warnings: Hint of femslash
Author's Note: A companion piece to " Green Tea." Thanks to J. for reading, and deirdre-aithne and illusionrain keeping me sane while I fought with this. And yeah I ( Read more... )

pairing: narcissa/astoria, community: femslash100, challenge: quill_it 50 fics, length: drabble (100-500), year: 2010, warning: femmeslash, fic, rating: pg-13, character: narcissa (black) malfoy, character: astoria (greengrass) malfoy

Comments 16

rosehiptea October 20 2010, 04:32:28 UTC

Wow. I love the calculation on Narcissa's part.

dexstarr October 20 2010, 04:47:22 UTC

Thanks! I think she is quite calculating to get what she wants, in all things.

reg_flint October 20 2010, 04:40:17 UTC

Love the fire imagery. Narcissa's wonderful cunning just shows the author for the snake she is (bows to you)

dexstarr October 20 2010, 04:48:41 UTC

Hey you! How's the trip going?

Thank you, my snakey friend! I was a little worried I might have gone overboard on the imagery, but for some reason, 'middle' made me think of the colors in a flame.

reg_flint October 20 2010, 05:32:29 UTC

Trip would be OK if I had a stable signal and the laptop didn't keep overheating. Everything else is a stunner.
Weird birds. Weird trees. Weird vegetation. Weirder strangelings on the plane. Especially the annoying crackhead who couldn't imagine what non-verbal meant and told me off for being a witch. hehehe.

dexstarr October 20 2010, 05:36:35 UTC

Glad to hear you're having a pretty good time. LOL at the witch comment! Bet you cracked up.

illusionrain October 20 2010, 04:44:00 UTC

You overdid yourself on the imagery. I knew it would be lovely, but this blew me away. Narcissa's careful calculations and cunning will certainly to her everyone - and just ... I loved this! The flame was a great way to describe the growing desire Astoria feels.

... okay. Taking a break from Merlin fic to tinker around with your giftfic.

illusionrain October 20 2010, 04:45:14 UTC

*certainly get her everywhere. orz, my brain. I think it broke.

dexstarr October 20 2010, 04:55:15 UTC

Thank you! <3

For some reason, 'middle' made me think of the colors in a flame.

I think I officially love this pairing. I think of Astoria as more innocent than Pansy, so my twisted mine really likes pairing her with calculating!sneaky!Narcissa.

And oooo giftfic *is excited*

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dexstarr October 20 2010, 13:30:39 UTC

Thanks, me too :D

amles80 October 20 2010, 12:05:10 UTC

Oh wow, I love this. :)

dexstarr October 20 2010, 13:32:19 UTC

Thanks! Worked pretty hard on it, so I'm happy that people are liking it.