When I first conceived of the story, I couldn't figure out how to give Boyd anything more than his cameo in part1/part2, which made me feel bad at the time but now I'm kinda just relieved for, all considered :/
Thank you so much for your comments! I'm happy that you thought it rocked. (heh)
oh my god. This was amazing. And whilst the idea of an Adelle/Dominic/Topher threesome is thoroughly delicious, the thing that really hooked me was the worldbuilding you did. I love the combination of tech and vampires SO BADLY and it never gets done often enough. I love the idea of Adelle as cult leader as well - and the fact that she's this unearthly, charismatic performer is just incredible. Are you planning to write more in this 'verse? It's crying out for a prequel, if nothing else!
Thank you so, so much. I had a lot of fun making the world in my mind, so I'm thrilled to hear some of that feeling I was aiming for came across on the page. (And yeah, there needs to be more sci-fi vampires. Pout.)
As of this point I think I'm over and done with this universe, I feel pretty satisfied with what I accomplished here and have a sense of conclusion. Honestly I can't even think what else I could write for it. But I guess you never know.
God, I feel bonesless after reading this. This story ended perfectly--I was so glad Topher didn't help them blow up the city btw--and I love the very end where we pull away from the story and we know that things (at least right now) are ok.
Really, these last chapter is everything I wanted and more. Alpha, still knife knife wielding and crazy for Caroline! Bitter Dr Saunders! The reveal of Dominic's feelings for Topher.D/T/D three way!
Its an awesome-overload. Topher/Dominic is so fantastic and D/T/D rocks my world.
Thanks a lot! It's nice to know that my ending worked and came off well. I'm happy to hear that you're happy, and that I was able to please and satisfy :)
Oh, yay, this was unsurprisingly but still awesomely wonderful! ♥ I am always so impressed by how epic your stories get; you so thoroughly create this whole world and so much goes on and by the time I get to the end I just feel so useless comment-wise because my whole brain is like boom! But let's try! I loved getting to see Topher living with the Revolutionaries out in nature -- my sappy Romantic predispositions had me all emotional with him, like, seeing a real forest for the first time, and this is probably just my own personal values (er, for ... trees?) coming in, but I thought that there was something really poignant about the way you portrayed the camp and the lifestyle even though it was so hard and not exactly escaping to naturey paradise or anything. You made me like Paul way more than usual! And I loved that we got to see Claire and Alpha, both of whom were so awesomely them. And DOM AND TOPHER REUNITING, HUZZAH! I thought you did all their scenes together so well, and their banter was such an utter source of joy no matter
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I am always so impressed by how epic your stories get; you so thoroughly create this whole world and so much goes on and by the time I get to the end I just feel so useless comment-wise because my whole brain is like boom!
...Boy, do I ever know that feeling. (I promise I'll get around to leaving better fb on your semi-epic D/D story eventually, I swear!)
I loved getting to see Topher living with the Revolutionaries out in nature -- my sappy Romantic predispositions had me all emotional with him, like, seeing a real forest for the first time[...]I thought that there was something really poignant about the way you portrayed the camp and the lifestyle even though it was so hard and not exactly escaping to naturey paradise or anything.
After spending the first two chapters with cities and civilazation, I wanted to make sure at some point we got out into the wilderness and got to really see what the enviroment was like in this world and what had happened to it. That contrast was important to me. It also made a great getaway for pining
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Thanks so much! I wasn't sure I could keep it up as we went into the finale, so I'm relieved and gleeful to hear you think I pulled it off. I'm especially happy that you think I did a good job maintaining the characters - always crucial with any AU, and at some times with this one it got a little hard to tell. For all their sameness, they were pretty darn different.
Who doesn't love a good threesome? ;) (Man, I have a feeling come tomorrow night, if I write anything it's gonna be a lot of fix-it threesome porn.)
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Thank you so much for your comments! I'm happy that you thought it rocked. (heh)
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As of this point I think I'm over and done with this universe, I feel pretty satisfied with what I accomplished here and have a sense of conclusion. Honestly I can't even think what else I could write for it. But I guess you never know.
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Really, these last chapter is everything I wanted and more. Alpha, still knife knife wielding and crazy for Caroline! Bitter Dr Saunders! The reveal of Dominic's feelings for Topher.D/T/D three way!
Its an awesome-overload. Topher/Dominic is so fantastic and D/T/D rocks my world.
*melts more*
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...Boy, do I ever know that feeling. (I promise I'll get around to leaving better fb on your semi-epic D/D story eventually, I swear!)
I loved getting to see Topher living with the Revolutionaries out in nature -- my sappy Romantic predispositions had me all emotional with him, like, seeing a real forest for the first time[...]I thought that there was something really poignant about the way you portrayed the camp and the lifestyle even though it was so hard and not exactly escaping to naturey paradise or anything.
After spending the first two chapters with cities and civilazation, I wanted to make sure at some point we got out into the wilderness and got to really see what the enviroment was like in this world and what had happened to it. That contrast was important to me. It also made a great getaway for pining ( ... )
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Who doesn't love a good threesome? ;) (Man, I have a feeling come tomorrow night, if I write anything it's gonna be a lot of fix-it threesome porn.)
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