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knitekat April 25 2013, 21:48:34 UTC
I see Connor get whumped, although considering the ending, I'm sure he's happy ;)

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deinonychus_1 April 28 2013, 13:08:23 UTC
Lol, it was written by me, of course Connor got whumped! I'm sure the ending more than made up for that as far as Connor is concerned, though. Thanks!

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freddiejoey April 25 2013, 22:38:19 UTC
Absolutely beautiful.

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deinonychus_1 April 28 2013, 13:08:40 UTC
Thanks!

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clea2011 April 25 2013, 22:59:33 UTC
Aww, that's a lovely interpretation of some very pretty artwork.

I admire the way you managed to bring in angst, whumped Connor, grumpy Becker and still make a lovely sweet fic.

Also, Danny is the best with his always very down to earth advice.

Great job! :-)

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deinonychus_1 April 28 2013, 13:11:26 UTC
Thanks! Danny muscled his way in a bit with that conversation, but I can just imagine him giving Connor that kind of advice. And Becker was bound to be grumpy - they went back a world full of future predators and wouldn't let him take an entire army!

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47eleven April 26 2013, 02:28:43 UTC
So gorgeous......

*hugs*

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deinonychus_1 April 28 2013, 13:11:42 UTC
Thanks!

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luvconnor April 26 2013, 05:53:49 UTC
Oh this is wonderful! Sorry it took me so long to get to (long work day and then getting my son moved into his own apartment) but it was so worth the wait :)

I love Connor standing up for himself and what he wanted, he wasn't having any of her nonsense. This is a nice little fix-it for me as I always hated that Abby fell back on the "don't want things to be weird" when she got scared.......and some bonus Whumped!Connor to get us there :)

I really enjoyed how you interpreted the art. There is quite the ominous feeling as they were searching, feeling that an unwelcome encounter could be just around the corner or in any building. Even in the most anxious of moments however, you temper it with a bit of humor, I loved Connor contracting a severe case of loose lips from the blood loss ;)

This was such a fun challenge and so very satisfying to be able to create something that in turn brings about such a fantastic story. Well done, I enjoyed it immensely :)

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deinonychus_1 April 28 2013, 13:16:04 UTC
Thanks! And thanks for such a lovely piece of artwork to work from.

I got so frustrated with Abby and her 'I don't things to be weird' thing after that kiss in 3.8. I just wish Connor had stood up to her when she messed him about like that. I'd wanted to write fic fixing that little situation for ages, and this challenge finally gave me a push to do it. And who can resist a little Connor whumping along the way? :-)

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