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KHR Fanfic: Nightingale [[8018]]

Jan 18, 2009 13:17

This is an entry pertaining to KHR. Sorry to all those on my flist who don't know it. :X

Anyway, so, I don't know what happened, but all of a sudden I started crushing hard on Yamamoto lol. I mean, I've always liked him, but now my obsession for him just jumped like, a million times more. XD ( Read more... )

bite me (not to death) anytime hibari, katekyo hitman reborn, fanfic

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decolorize January 19 2009, 02:10:57 UTC

YOU ARE TOO KIND, ATAN. <3

Ah, yeah, that's what I meant. I meant, out of all the "mainstream" (1827, D18, 8059) pairings in KHR, 8059 is the most canon.

Lol tbh, I was kind of forcing that part & the 1st half out, since my main focus was that "Hibari is like a bird" thing, which is only being mentioned in the 2nd half. So I kinda had to make up what their regular interactions would be, before they were close & stuff.

Sankyuu~ I think that's somewhat how I view Hibari to be like, and translate that onto Yamamoto's POV.

Glad to provide~ We need more 8018 fics. ♥

labymiro January 18 2009, 22:01:44 UTC

i'm now gonna go and cry. somehow, The person most important to me is right beside me - I’m content with just that. << this was so sad u.u after all that. I mean, I like it, especially 'cuz it's not outright 8018... well, it is, but not in reciprocal way, if you know what i mean. i love both of them here and i can so imagine 8018 happening if it's this kinda way. but i'm still gonna go to my dark corner and sniffle.

and profile pic is lovely but you know that hibari prolly bit yamamoto to death after that rite? lol

decolorize January 19 2009, 02:16:12 UTC

Whaaaa I'm-I'm sorry! >>;; I just have this very melancholic style of writing, and most of my fics have that depressing feel to them.

Umn... to make you feel a bit better, think about this. What if this story was told from Hibari's point of view, instead? Since this was taken from Yamamoto's POV, HE's the one who thinks that Hibari can't love anyone, right? But if Hibari doesn't care about him in the least bit, he wouldn't comfort Yamamoto after he killed someone for the first time (in his own kinda rough way). Heck, he LETS Yamamoto be beside him. That's gotta speak for something, right? ;D

...Idk, I hope I left it vague enough for you to interpret their future. I didn't want to write an outright romatic relationship, because I know that's not how 8018 canonly would work.

Lol yup. ♥ 2 seconds later & Yamamoto would make a face & yelp in pain since Hibari totally bit him in the neck given their positions. XD

labymiro January 19 2009, 07:37:49 UTC

lol that's cool. i reli liked it, how canon it is and also your melancholic style too. my writing fluctuates like hell -_- so consistency is always envious!

decolorize January 19 2009, 07:45:50 UTC

To be complimented by an awesome writer like you makes me so happy. :D And, idk, I wish sometimes I can write happy fics or even romantic ones, but I can't, orz, so many different writing styles is really more envious. ♥

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bloodyapplepi January 18 2009, 22:20:55 UTC

:3 That was lovely darlin' ♥

decolorize January 19 2009, 02:17:49 UTC

Thank you~ ♥

I did not know you were in the KHR fandom. :O Must've been when I was still in hiatus, BUT I'M SO GLAD YOU ARE NOW!!

Hilarious icon, btw. XD

bloodyapplepi January 19 2009, 02:22:34 UTC

lol I've been in the fandom for...oh I'd say since late November or so. Maybe October because I remember talking to enko_chan about it. xD

:3 Thanks. -likes that pairing but finds 3318 is rarer than 8018-

decolorize January 19 2009, 04:32:40 UTC

Ah, yeah. That was right around the time I disappeared orz. But-But YAYZ more friends in the fandom~ /o/

Ah, 3318. That's Ryohei/Hibari, right? Lol I always just call it R18 cuz I thought Ryohei doesn't have a number. Apparently he does. >>;; 3318 is crack love. ♥

So-So like, who's your most fave. character in KHR? :O *curious*

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aquarian_days January 19 2009, 00:23:06 UTC

Aw, I really liked this! It's sort of hopeless and hopeful at the same time, if that makes sense. It's like, Yamamoto is convinced that the best he can do is to stand by Hibari's side, which seems awfully empty and unfulfilling, but at the same time, the fact that Hibari allows it, in his own Hibari-ish way, that's sorta like returning Yamamoto's feelings. (Which unfortunately, I don't think Yamamoto has quite understood yet.)

It was nice how the story came off as a snapshot of their relationship at a particular time. I felt like the ending left just enough of a question mark that you could see their relationship continuing to change--there's still plenty of things Yamamoto doesn't know about Hibari (like why he love Namimori so much, or even what Hibari actually likes about him), that yeah, their relationship still seems like a work in progress to me, much more than Yamamoto realizes. There was enough change and development in their relationship throughout the story that I don't things will stagnate here and I can see them ( ... )

decolorize January 19 2009, 04:01:21 UTC

You-You... I think I love you. ♥ Everything that I was trying to incorporate into this fic and its theme, you managed to catch them all. *offers you virtual cookie*

Anyway, to be a little more coherent COUGHCOUGH, I think, the problem with this thing, their relationship as a whole, is that this is told from Yamamoto's POV. As I was writing this, I discreetly put up Hibari's reaction everywhere, but readers don't often notice, because this is written from Yamamoto's POV, therefore, we interpret that maybe Hibari really doesn't love Yamamoto, as HE had thought.

While I can't say that Hibari might romantically love him (I can't say that he doesn't, either), one can tell that obviously Hibari cares for him to a certain degree to comfort him (in his own rough sort of way) after Yamamoto's inital shock from his first kill, or the fact that he even lets Yamamoto hangs around him at all. And you're perfectly right, maybe, just MAYBE, if he had pushed a bit more, their relationship might be closer than friendship, but alas, Yamamoto is that ( ... )

hanbomi January 19 2009, 00:38:40 UTC

HI I LOVE THIS I LOVE YOU THIS IS SO GOOD YOOOU :<
ngggg you wrote yama so well ♥
which is surprisingly rare ;____; but ahhh thankyou for this. please write more~~

decolorize January 19 2009, 04:04:32 UTC

OMG SANKYUU SO MUCH. I-I'm not deserving of your praise, I'm sure there's a thousand other writers who write a WAAAAAAY better Yamamoto than I do.

But-But, thank you for the compliment. I'm sorry it's such a depressing fic. I-I hope I can write more "happy" fics in the future, yes, especially since it seems that my obsession with Yamamoto isn't going anywhere anytime soon. ♥