KHR Fanfic: Nightingale [[8018]]

[decolorize]

This is an entry pertaining to KHR. Sorry to all those on my flist who don't know it. :X

Anyway, so, I don't know what happened, but all of a sudden I started crushing hard on Yamamoto lol. I mean, I've always liked him, but now my obsession for him just jumped like, a million times more. XD

Comments

[lifetocome]

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T^T Aww this is so sad but so good at the same time! Hibari is really Hibari... he's never gonna change, is he? Poor Yamamoto~ so devoted yet getting so little back and YET still saying that is more than enough. I love your descriptions, they're really vivid! Great fic!

[decolorize]

Thank you so much~ I'm glad to know they weren't OOC, since I tried so hard to make them IC considering this is my 1st time writing 8018. I'm so glad it wasn't (total) fail.

And *sigh* Yamamoto is Yamamoto & that's why this fic fits because he's JUST exactly the type to do such a selfless thing. But that's why we love him anyway, right? ;D

[shiyaki_chan]

Aw, one of the best 8018 I've read so far. Very in-character and I just love it, when Yama's not SUCH a dumb, herbivore-ish character, like some portray him. It was just the right mix <3 And it's so cute, even though I feel a bit sorry for Yama, but I understand his motive for not saying anything about his feelings to Hibari.

Hope you'll write another 8018 <3

[decolorize]

O-One of the best? :O Thank you so much! That's a BIG compliment for a first-timer writer in 8018 like me. And I'm so glad the characters didn't seem to be OOC. Personally, I believe that Yamamoto isn't as dumb as he outwardly look - in fact, he might be smarter than he lets on, & I wanted to make sure I portrayed that in the story.

I-I hope that I'll get inspiration to write more 8018, too. Especially one that isn't as depressing as this one orz.

[tyreling]

This is really lovely written. Yamamoto is LOVE! <33 It's really so sad to see him like this, but you're right. In canon, this is 8018 as close as they can get. Even if we want them to get closer, it just... won't go well with Hibari's nature. Nice job! I love the sleeping-on-the-roof scene after the graduation.

I do admit I've gone through the same phase you did. 8059 and 8018. It's really sad that 8018 doesn't get enough long-fic.XDD

[decolorize]

Thank you~ That's precisely why this is 8018, and not D18 or any other Hibari pairings, because I think only really Yamamoto is selfless enough to do this. The main theme of this fic is how Hibari is like a bird and he can't be chained down to anything, and Yamamoto just REALLY fits, though sad as it is. And lol I'm glad you like that scene. Tbh, it was the LAST section I wrote for this story. XD;;

Ah, yes. There's not a lot of 8018 fics in the 1st place, let alone REALLY long & good fics. I hope it'll be more popular as time goes on. (Amano-sensei, give us more hints, damnit! XD)

[tyreling]

Poor Yamamoto. I sometimes wish he wouldn't have to do such a thing. It hurts me to see him ANGST but other times I'll adore the Yama!angst if the writer is amazing.

XDD;;; Ahahah, really? I hadn't even noticed the distortion... that scene just slips in without much problem in my mind.

It's really sad to see such a small following for 8018. ;-; The only one I'm loving at the moment is "Windshear" and some of izkariote's works. (*sends her lots of suggestions in fanmail*... if only I know how to write her address) I've tried to write fanfiction for this fandom... but I'm not really good at grasping the characters right.

[decolorize]

I don't like it either, since I love him to pieces, but with that personality of his, & if he happens to fall in love with Hibari, that's what he'll get. ;___; I actually am fond of angst orz. I don't like really fluffy & sappy story all that much. I-I like seeing my fave. characters tortured, yes. DX

I actually wrote the last half 1st, & the 1st half last. >>;; *writes whatever section comes to her mind at the time* But I'm glad it didn't seem to disturb the flow.

Windshear is awesome, yeah. :O I didn't know izkariote writes 8018, too. I should check it out then. And really, you should just try writing it! :D To tell you the truth, this is the 1st KHR fic that I've managed to finish. So yeah, you never know until you try~

Also, if you ever want to discuss characterization, feel free to talk to me. I LOVE picking apart every little action everyone makes & interpret it. ♥ *loves analysis*

[proboscus]

Beautiful. I put studying for midterms on hold for for this, and it was worth every second. Spot-on, beautiful narrative, heart-wrenching and full of emotion, and just guh. Perfect. Thank you for sharing.

[decolorize]

Oh god, I-I hope you had enough time to study after reading this? :O I'm sorry it's so depressing. I hope that the next time I write 8018, it'll be, you know, lighter. XD

Thanks for the comment~ I'm glad I didn't fail on my first try at writing 8018 orz.

[hiroya_chan]

ARGHHHH your lousy grammar-checker is late in commenting. D:

But hahahahh, I really liked this fanfic, I'll have you know, and NOT FAIL. Not fail, ohkaye. :| And good thing you forced yourself to cough out the first half! 8D Makes for great development. <333

WRITE MORE, OHKAYE? Ohkaye, yay. ( *W*)

[decolorize]

IT DOES NOT MATTTTTTTTTTER. Without you this fic would've been total fail anyway. ♥

T-Thanks. It's no where near as great as yours, but-but I hope this will inspired you somewhat to write moar 8018? XD *nudge nudge*

Lol you're so funny, Hiro. <333 And-and I uh, DID write more. But it's not exactly 8018 nor is it as deep as this. In fact, it's a crack fic & it fails & it has no plot. DX

[hiroya_chan]

Aw, you would've managed just fine. <33

;~; I tryyy. I don't have 8018 plotbunnies jumping me anymore, see. D:

I HOPE THAT IS NOT A BAD THING ( *W*)
HUHUHUHHHH I JUST SAW IT ON MY FRIENDS PAGE I'LL GO HAVE A LOOKSEE NAO <33333

[decolorize]

You are too nice. ;___; Remember how there were like, 60 mistakes or something orz? XD;;

W-Well, until you get it back, then. H-Hopefully Amano-sensei would put in more hints for us? ♥ PLEZE DRAW THEM NEXT TO EACH OTHER AGAIN LOOKIN' SEXAY K THANKS. Hetalia's taken over you lol.

Me =/= crack. Lol it just doesn't fit. XD;;
I-I WILL REPLY TO THAT LATER. WHEN I DON'T HAVE SCHOOL IN LIKE, 4 MINUTES, YESH.