Fated Chapter 10

Mar 01, 2010 22:24

Title Fated
Author: deadoralive0013
Pairing: Ryden
Rating: PG13
POV: 3rd
Summary: Ryan has a gift. He's able to see the future only, he couldn't control when. As he worked as a fortune teller, he made up lies to tell people, not really expecting to get a real vision. But one night, he met an annoying young businessman and Ryan's world will never be the same ( Read more... )

ryden fic, fated

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rydendoesexist March 1 2010, 15:19:20 UTC
d00d(just like how Ryan had always said), THAT WAS SMOKING HOT THAT I THOUGHT I'D WET MY PANT!

At last, a kiss! Too bad there's no tongue involved. xD
I think Julie knew about them...
And wow, is Brendon gay? He sure has guts, though I don't blame him. It's all Ryan's fault for being overly pretty(not in a good way). <3

Thanks for the update!

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FC! deadoralive0013 March 2 2010, 14:56:05 UTC
yeah? He always said that? XD

LOL... Hmm... how can I explain this... I guess their action didn't really show the internal conflicts and emotions... Maybe on the next chapter. I hope I can make it clearer. :D

And thank you for reading!

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mitchiemarie March 1 2010, 17:47:40 UTC
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Sam?!??!
no!!!!
D:
Ryan!
protect your princess!
xD and by princess I mean brendon.
But Ryan should stop backing away.
or he should just tell brendon his vision
:P
brendon has alot of nerve. He is awesome.
julie probably suspects something.
:3 I'm glad that you updated bb!!
xD I've been looking for this for like his whole weekend!

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deadoralive0013 March 2 2010, 14:59:19 UTC
LOL... Brendon is no princess... maybe.

I guess, when there's that really strong attraction... and then they're sharing a bedroom! what else is bound to happen?

awww... thanks. :D

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melissasandusky March 1 2010, 18:32:25 UTC
OH MY GOD! I'm dying to read more, I freaking love this fic so much! Hehe I can't wait for chapter 11! :) I love the kissing between the two, it was sweet! xD

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deadoralive0013 March 2 2010, 15:00:31 UTC
^____^ Thank you so much for reading.

hehe... glad you liked that part.

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vivheartsrydon March 1 2010, 20:35:23 UTC
Awesome,hot and complicated!Damn and oh no what's wrong with Samantha??Gahhh i'm so curious!!I bow to your awesomeness at writing kissing scenes!!I hope it doesn't take them a loooooooooong time to figure out just how attracted they are to each other!! ♥

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deadoralive0013 March 2 2010, 15:03:40 UTC
Thank you. :D
Sam is... soon, but don't worry much.
Nyahahah... I'm still a noob. :P
I think their relationship will head in a different direction... well I plan to. XD

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chaosforever March 1 2010, 20:42:35 UTC
i think julies onto them
must be like sister intuition or something
but WOW
that kiss was hot...even without tounge that was HOT
and now its like
dun dun duh
with what sam saw.

♥♥♥

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deadoralive0013 March 2 2010, 15:05:35 UTC
Julie... yeah. She knows more than what people think she knows...

XD omg... Thanks. I feel like a perv... somehow.

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