Fated Chapter 10

[deadoralive0013]

Title Fated
Author: deadoralive0013
Pairing: Ryden
Rating: PG13
POV: 3rd
Summary: Ryan has a gift. He's able to see the future only, he couldn't control when. As he worked as a fortune teller, he made up lies to tell people, not really expecting to get a real vision. But one night, he met an annoying young businessman and Ryan's world will never be the same

Comments

[allionacid]

I love, love, love this!

Again with the cliff hangers! They're so, so suspenseful!

I would try to leave a more coherent comment, but I think my dinner is about to go up in flames. O.O

[deadoralive0013]

So you like the cliffies? XD hehe... thanks for reading. Comments are very much appreciated regardless of coherency. ^__^

[eastdisease]

so ryan way to be a douche :c god, when you make out with someone you don't just say "that never happened lol" because that's just rude. and also, way to be stupid, you had those goddamn visions and you know it's inevitable so STOP.

the way you wrote the whole kissing sequence, especially the beginning, was wonderful. it made me feel nervous!

[deadoralive0013]

Nicely put. Ryan is being stupid... I'll let you have a look at what's going on in his head next chapter. :D

nyahahah... Thank you. So maybe I am turning into a perv...

[xxloveisfatexx]

lovelovelovelovelove!!
missed this story so much
i'm glad for the rydonness of it though
if only those two stopped being so hard-headed
....
on a more serious note, OMG WHAT THE HELL IS SAM OKAY?!?!?! D:

[deadoralive0013]

Thank you! :)

Sam? oh, she's fine.

[thatscraptastic]

omg stupid Julie!
Great chapter, I loved it
Can't wait for more :)

[deadoralive0013]

Hehehe... she didn't mean to! XD

Thank you very much. Hope I'll be able to update this soon.

[deadoralive0013]

Awww... lol... Thanks. :)

Yeah... He's under a phase... both of them are... and as always, they'll learn.

^___^