BABY! PLEASE LOOK AT ME - 1/2

[deadlyscarlet]

Title: Baby! Please, Look at me
Chapter: 1/2
Author: deadlyscarlet
Beta: N/A
Genre: AU/ Romance/ Slight Fluff/ Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Mention of Death, Suicide Attempt, Oral, Sex
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha[Main], Aoi/OC[Betrayal], OC/Uruha[Betrayal]
Band: the GazettE
Characters: Aoi, Uruha, Kai, OCs

Synopsis: Aoi who had been betrayed by his long

Comments

[venomousliberty]

What the

[deadlyscarlet]

OMG HIME BB *throws herself at u* I love this comment..
I am so sorry I turned u into a crying mess *wipes ur tears* and u r right..my eyes turned blurry during the time Aoi removed an almost dying Uruha from his apartment and when Aoi cuts his wrists..
AOI PLUSHIE *kyaaaaaaaaaa* thank u
I didn't even start writing the sequel but damn after seeing u like this I think i will start writing it immediately and update it soon okay ^^
Good thing i didn't update this on my birthday..it wud have sucked to have u all cry T_T

[venomousliberty]

*hugs back*

I'm still crying. I'll probably cry whenever I read this, which is probably often. *sniffs* It's so perfectly angsty. I love it.

And when's your birthday, btw? I don't mind reading this on your birthday but then it's your special day so we hafta be happy on that day! :DDD

[deadlyscarlet]

Aw i hope u don't cry for chapter 2 coz it is gonna be maybe even more angsty than tis..i just finished the outline and my heart strings r already being tugged painfully...
It's so nice to hear u will read it often :)
July 15..i know i want everyone to be happy tats y i didnt post this on my birthday XD

[xadowangel]

You! Come here young lady! What do you think you're doing to me poor heart??? Why why why???

I was like asdkflljjgklalakk!!!!

That Did Not Happen!!!! Aoi aoi aoi!!! Poor bb! I can't help but feel so sorry for him even though he was a bastard for almost raping uru, but he's so madly in love, what could he do? Uruha, i love you to bits but sometimes you need to open your eyes and see what you really have right? He just took aoi for granted, and me no like.

And that boyfriend he's crying rivers for was a fucktard. Who ruins someone else's life because he's gonna die? Ugh!!

This story, is amazing. Why you no post the sequel earlier? Me wanna moreeeeee!!!!!

*bribes you with aoi*

[deadlyscarlet]

Aw Xadow..i m sorry *heals ur heart*

Aoi is a poor thing..he is like so broken over his relationships and cudnt take it when Uru kept talking abt his ex

I think u might forgive Uru in chapter 2..poor thing..but OMG u already gt real close by calling Uruha's ex a Fucktard..u will know hw right u r when u read ch 2

ah i wanted to post ch 1 after i was done with ch 2 but i didnt get inspired at all so well i posted ch 1 first..but now i hav an outline ready so i will start writing today ^^

thanx a lot for the lovely comment *hugs*

[veroxion]

Yay! You finally uploaded it. I can't wait for the second part of this. I feel so sorry for poor Aoi, having to go through heartbreak twice. He doesn't deserve any of it, and even though it was wrong of him to force himself on Uruha like that, it was understandable after so long of feeling rejected by him and being in an unrequited love.

I hope Uruha comes back and saves Aoi... I know he's hurting and he didn't deserve any of that. I guess in a way, he's hurting as well. Poor baby. :(

Anyway, I love this fic and I can't wait for the continuation. Love you, sweetie! I hope the days leading up to your birthday are good. (^^)

[deadlyscarlet]

Vero *hugs*

U made me confident enough to post this ^^ I am sure Aoi will be saved and yes u cant blame him..it was wrong of him to force Uruha like tat but well he was madly in love..

and hopefully u will understand Uruha's position in chapter 2 ^^

thank u Vero..the days r pathetic but well i try to adjust..thanx for being there for me
^_^

[vampire_kiki]

huh, basically I think the ending serves Aoi just right.

[vampire_kiki]

i mean....'the ending part of this chapter', forgot to clarify.

[deadlyscarlet]

Ah well i never planned Aoi to cut his wrists..i hope u didnt start hating Aoi or something..coz when u read chapter 2 u will feel very sorry for him..

thank u for readin and commenting

[vampire_kiki]

huh huh, turning into a jerk when your best friend takes a lover for himself really doesn't add to my sympathy list.....

[deadlyscarlet]

Aw I m sorry *pats u*

i will try to post the ending soon okay..

thank u for reading and commenting ^^