BABY! PLEASE LOOK AT ME - 1/2

[deadlyscarlet]

Title: Baby! Please, Look at me
Chapter: 1/2
Author: deadlyscarlet
Beta: N/A
Genre: AU/ Romance/ Slight Fluff/ Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Mention of Death, Suicide Attempt, Oral, Sex
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha[Main], Aoi/OC[Betrayal], OC/Uruha[Betrayal]
Band: the GazettE
Characters: Aoi, Uruha, Kai, OCs

Synopsis: Aoi who had been betrayed by his long

Comments

[vampire_kiki]

huh, basically I think the ending serves Aoi just right.

[vampire_kiki]

i mean....'the ending part of this chapter', forgot to clarify.

[deadlyscarlet]

Ah well i never planned Aoi to cut his wrists..i hope u didnt start hating Aoi or something..coz when u read chapter 2 u will feel very sorry for him..

thank u for readin and commenting

[vampire_kiki]

huh huh, turning into a jerk when your best friend takes a lover for himself really doesn't add to my sympathy list.....

[deadlyscarlet]

oh tat...Aoi knows very well tat if he continues to remain by Uruha's side he might make Uruha cry..u know wat happened when Uru kept talking abt tat ex of his right..tat was wat Aoi wanted to avoid..well hopefully these issues will be resolved in Chapter 2

[vampire_kiki]

i'll keep my mind open and look forward for this.