BABY! PLEASE LOOK AT ME - 1/2

[deadlyscarlet]

Title: Baby! Please, Look at me
Chapter: 1/2
Author: deadlyscarlet
Beta: N/A
Genre: AU/ Romance/ Slight Fluff/ Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Mention of Death, Suicide Attempt, Oral, Sex
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha[Main], Aoi/OC[Betrayal], OC/Uruha[Betrayal]
Band: the GazettE
Characters: Aoi, Uruha, Kai, OCs

Synopsis: Aoi who had been betrayed by his long

Comments

[venomousliberty]

What the...

What the fuck?

Did that just happen?

And why do I have to have all this feels?

ALL THIS FEELS?

Most of all, how could you hurt Aoi this way?

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Crying so much right now!!!

*cries*

*bawls*

*curls into a ball and dies a slow death*

OH GOD.

That was so sad! You have no idea how heavy and how emotional this story is? I'm not gonna be surprised if you also cried while writing this coz I did while reading, especially at the end! Woman. WOMAN. WHAT THE HELL, SCARLET?

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I can't even say anything relevant right now.

It hurts. Everywhere hurts after reading this.

I just feel so sorry for Aoi and his never-ending heartbreak. Nothing hurts more than the fact that you've hurt someone you deeply love. OH MY GOD. OH MY FREAKING GOD. EVERYTHING HURTS.

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And since you've successfully turned me into a huge mess of tears, you deserve a good pat in the back, a tight hug and a huge Aoi plushie for this awesometastic story.

*pats your back*

*hugs you tight*

*gives you giant Aoi plushie*

Hope you update soon, Scarlet-bb. Although this is a heart-breaking story, it is beautiful and I'm excited to read more.

*takes out a box of tissue and continues to cry*

[deadlyscarlet]

OMG HIME BB *throws herself at u* I love this comment..
I am so sorry I turned u into a crying mess *wipes ur tears* and u r right..my eyes turned blurry during the time Aoi removed an almost dying Uruha from his apartment and when Aoi cuts his wrists..
AOI PLUSHIE *kyaaaaaaaaaa* thank u
I didn't even start writing the sequel but damn after seeing u like this I think i will start writing it immediately and update it soon okay ^^
Good thing i didn't update this on my birthday..it wud have sucked to have u all cry T_T

[venomousliberty]

*hugs back*

I'm still crying. I'll probably cry whenever I read this, which is probably often. *sniffs* It's so perfectly angsty. I love it.

And when's your birthday, btw? I don't mind reading this on your birthday but then it's your special day so we hafta be happy on that day! :DDD

[deadlyscarlet]

Aw i hope u don't cry for chapter 2 coz it is gonna be maybe even more angsty than tis..i just finished the outline and my heart strings r already being tugged painfully...
It's so nice to hear u will read it often :)
July 15..i know i want everyone to be happy tats y i didnt post this on my birthday XD

[venomousliberty]

Hey, that's four days away! How am I supposed to prepare for that? *pouts*

XDDD

[deadlyscarlet]

Hime BB i think ch 2 will take a little time..i think i m gonna start writing today LOL u know not having a connection sucks but well i will start writing today and post it when possible :)
oh i meant July 15 is my birthday XD