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runedgirl July 24 2010, 03:17:17 UTC
Thank you for the lovely read - Dean's emotions, his struggle to deal with them and get himself back to the present -- were painful to read, and rang very true. And mmm, gotta love Sam, determined to give Dean whatever it is he needs. Thanks for the happy ending, it hit the spot :)

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deadbeat_nymph July 24 2010, 03:29:39 UTC
You're welcome, and thank you for the lovely comment and your kind words. And of course, there had to be a happy ending for our boys. Boys!

Thank you! *hugs*

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janissa11 July 24 2010, 05:12:08 UTC
I teared up several times reading this, and yet the warmth of it penetrated in so many ways, the earthiness and delight of the excellent food and kindness of people, the uncomplicated comfort of the suite, and the boon Alex was truly granting to tormented souls. Splendid story, absolutely beautiful. Thank you!

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deadbeat_nymph July 24 2010, 17:43:30 UTC
Thank you so much for the feedback. It seems that you got exactly what was I striving for with each element you mentioned, which is a great compliment. And the fact that you teared up is probably the biggest compliment a writer could get, so thank you very much for sharing with me your experience of reading my fic. Awesome comment is awesome!

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janissa11 September 2 2010, 02:54:26 UTC
Hi again. Just so you know, it's just as enjoyable the second time around, and just as tear-inducing. But in a good way, of course. This is something I don't find in a lot of fiction, this absolute embracing of the senses -- the taste and smell of things, the heat or cold, the softness or lack thereof. This story really is a feast, with sharp palate cleansers -- Dean's hallucination/flashback in bed with Sam is like a lovely, pale green sorbet, cool and inviting -- and made with the concentrated essence of the most lethal Scotch bonnet peppers. It's that kind of shock: expect one thing, get something else entirely. Or --

Oh, I can't explain all that well. But I hope you have some idea what I'm fumbling around trying to say. Deep down, it isn't just about excellent writing. It's also about truly loving the characters -- and you have both here, in abundance.

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ldyghst July 24 2010, 05:14:31 UTC
This was absolutely gorgeous! Very well written and emotional! Thank you so much for sharing! :D

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deadbeat_nymph July 24 2010, 17:37:38 UTC
You're welcome! And thank you for the kind words and feedback. It's always very appreciated. :D

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katsheswims July 24 2010, 15:58:42 UTC
I love this!!

I really thought the 'monster' was going after Dean too. But I'm glad it wasn't. He didn't need another problem on top of the PTSD and the assorted traumas from Hell.

I'm glad Dean is opening up to Sam. I do think talking about what he went through will help him. Though he hasn't told Sam about the 40 yrs part yet...

The ending was great!! Puppies! And Dean has a dog! And they have a house-a home!!

Now I just have to imagine that the apocalypse is averted-no Lucifer. And since Sam promised to stay away from Ruby, I think that might happen! Yay!

I'm glad that Dean is finally acknowledgeing that his father wasn't always good to him. It's not a pleasant realization, but it will help him.

Keep up the good work!!

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deadbeat_nymph July 24 2010, 18:30:54 UTC
Aww, thank you so much for the sweet words and the thoughtful response. I'm so glad that you loved it, and I'm very grateful for your feedback.

I do think talking about what he went through will help him. Though he hasn't told Sam about the 40 yrs part yet...

I think it's imperative that he talks to Sam; he doesn't have anyone else, not really. I struggled with the 40 years issue and then decided that I would leave it for now; I thought Dean would have to work up for it. And hey, yays for something to put in the sequel! ;)

Now I just have to imagine that the apocalypse is averted-no Lucifer. And since Sam promised to stay away from Ruby, I think that might happen! Yay!Yes! That's what I'm hoping, too. I actually started this fic during the hiatus between seasons three and four, and it took me a long time to write, so during S4, I kept wondering if Sam was right, and if maybe I should change my fic to have Sam embrace his bad self. It was really interesting to me how that all ended up in canon, and in a sense made my fic work even ( ... )

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tru_witness July 24 2010, 18:41:40 UTC
A wonderful case-file fic with Dean-angst, great H/C, a hint of D/s and spanking. What else could a girl ask for?

I loved the case, it was something completely different and had a very satisfying ending. But the heart of the story was Dean's journey back from Hell, and you really delivered. Dean was truly broken at the beginning of the story, but by the end you could feel the hope. As for Sam, what can I say, so patient and supportive and so very, very masterful. *yum*

Thank you for sharing.

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deadbeat_nymph July 26 2010, 17:32:17 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment. I'm happy to hear that the case itself appears to be satisfying; as you pinpointed, the true story is that of Dean's journey, so that you were able to enjoy the case while experiencing the heart of the story as I intended is fantastic.

And, of course, I am only too happy to oblige you with the Dean angst, H/C, hints of D/s, spanking, and a masterful Sam. Hee!

You're welcome 'for sharing', and thank you for sharing your thoughts!

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