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day_eight

Birthday fic for gogochan - The Game

May 08, 2008 02:48

Title: The Game
Pairing: Grimmjow/Ulquiorra
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Yaoi, wallsex, slight d/s themes, mild bondage, PWP.
Disclaimer: Bleach belongs to Kubo. Both characters are older than eighteen.

( My mind fought against my reflexes and won, but the battle was far from over. )

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gogo_ergo_sum May 8 2008, 08:32:59 UTC

Wheeeee! Birthday dinner tonight was SO FRUSTRATING and FAIL, and this was very, very, very naisu to read before bed.

THANK YOU SO MUCH, DAY!!

Yummy, yummy Grimm and Ichi. Delicious wallsex. AND some BDSM. Am so very happy right now! Thank you for an awesome gift-fic that is muchly made of WIN.

gogo liked this part, especially:

"Fuck. Don't fucking move," he snarled, his breathing shaky as he used his weight to push me into the wall. He brought one his hands to the middle of my back, pinning me there so that I was trapped. I smirked, but remained still, a bit grateful for the extra time to adjust. A long minute went by as he struggled to catch his breath. My body began to react, a twinge of desire sweeping through me, like an itch beneath my skin. Finally, he began to slide in and out, but the slowness of his movements still didn't give me the friction that I wanted. I began to rock back as he pushed forward, gritting my teeth in frustration ( ... )

Re: !!!!!!!!!!!!!! day_eight May 8 2008, 20:36:02 UTC

I cross-posted like crazy today. ^.^

I'm so glad you liked it~

Happy Birthday, again, and I hope that your day was okay - in spite of the dinner of fail.

((And lol, "nice to read before bed." Gogo never went to bed! You must be exhausted.))

Re: !!!!!!!!!!!!!! gogo_ergo_sum May 9 2008, 08:19:38 UTC

exhausted? something like that...

but yanno what? 30seconds scenes of UTTER WIN tonight made up for a lot of fail and wank. TOO MUCH FUN.

And this fic... am glad you're getting such awesome comments because it was really amazing.

Mmm...do like the way you write Grimm. ((is imagining Grimmjow and Renji as pool boys for the bleach_bdsm Spring Fling Challenge. DELICIOUS~

barukode May 8 2008, 12:54:17 UTC

You already know how I feel about this, but I'll tell you again anyway. Our friendship is faltering because of this piece. *wink*
You are incredible. The two of them are SO in character, don't even DARE warn about OOCness; the entire plot was just.. ugh. It's like Yumi and Ikkaku. Ikkaku likes to think that he's in control, but we all know that Yumi is. Ulquiorra at the end.. God. You kill me dead, Day. I think the tally is now.. 698350795873 million + 3. *spazzes on the floor* fdlsgkj;dklsagjglk!
Anyways.. Sorry that this gave you such trouble and mindfucks, but the truth is: YOU WOULD NEVER KNOW READING IT. Wonderful piece, not that I'd expect anything lower from you ♥

day_eight May 8 2008, 20:40:25 UTC

Grimmjow and Ulquiorra, breaking up friendships around the world. *grin*

Your comments always give me warm fuzzies. ♥ Thank you for taking the time to read it, and I'm so happy that you liked it!

sommar May 8 2008, 21:53:37 UTC

Oh my... *blushes* I loved it, intense and so incharacter I actually saw it in my head *and boy was it dirty too XDDD*
Thank you for this ^^

day_eight May 8 2008, 21:57:03 UTC

Aww, thank you so much~ I'm so glad that you found it in character - that's something I always worry about when I write Ulquiorra. ♥

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day_eight May 9 2008, 03:29:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it and took the time to comment~

kishirepantera May 9 2008, 01:05:53 UTC

Wow. *is momentarily speechless* I generally like my Grimmjow straight, but that was fucking hot and I loved it. *wipes drool from corners of mouth*

Hi, you don't know me by the way, but I'm Emily. Nice to meet you :D You have gained a new fan! *adds to memories*

Is there more of this I can read by the way?

P.S. Your layout/background is the sex. *pets it adoringly*

day_eight May 9 2008, 03:33:15 UTC

Aww~ Thank you so much. I actually don't really like this pairing, so this is the only one I have for you to read. It was a request from a good friend. Sorry that there isn't more!

((And isn't Shuu sexy? I have this pic as my background here and on myspace, as my desktop, and as the background on my Zune. I'm a bit obsessed. *grin*))

kishirepantera May 9 2008, 03:54:15 UTC

Shuu is definitely worth obsessing over!! I myself am a Grimmwhore XD but Shuu is just as delicious.

*lol's at your icon* That is just awesome. XD

Would you mind terribly if I friended you? :D

day_eight May 9 2008, 03:55:29 UTC

I wouldn't mind at all, as long as I can friend you back~

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