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day_eight

Birthday fic for gogochan - The Game

May 08, 2008 02:48

Title: The Game
Pairing: Grimmjow/Ulquiorra
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Yaoi, wallsex, slight d/s themes, mild bondage, PWP.
Disclaimer: Bleach belongs to Kubo. Both characters are older than eighteen.

( My mind fought against my reflexes and won, but the battle was far from over. )

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Comments 41

roguemystic May 9 2008, 06:34:41 UTC

Wow. I don't usually read this pairing but the title convinced me ^.^ You write so well! These two are very much in character!

day_eight May 9 2008, 06:49:06 UTC

Thank you! It's such a relief to know that they were in character. Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

roguemystic May 9 2008, 06:50:22 UTC

^.^ it's no problem! When it's written as well as this, it deserves to have comments!

ak_bennington May 9 2008, 08:14:59 UTC

I liked it^^ Congrats!! It was hot and sexy XD. Grimmjow makes me think in anything more than wallsex hehe. He is so wild... And Ulquiorra... OMG how much I love him^^ He's my absolutely love, I like him more with Orihime than men and I'm not very used to see him in yaoi themes but I have to confess that Grimmjow/Ulquiorra is a great pairing and I like them a lot together ^^
I liked especially this part: "All the pain had faded, leaving behind a pleasure so intense that I was almost afraid to enjoy it." Poor Ulqui XD he doesn't know what to feel XDDD, Grimmjow is confusing him XD. But I liked the end too, when Ulquiorra makes clear to Grimmjow he doesn't need him ^^ Is Grimmjow who need Ulquiorra, you have to admitt it, Grimmji!!!!
As you can see, I liked it ^^ (and sorry if my english sucks T_T)
Kisses!!
Ak

day_eight May 9 2008, 21:24:37 UTC

Wow, I'm so flattered that you read and liked this, even though you don't usually like Ulquiorra in yaoi. ♥ Thank you for such a lovely comment~ (And your English is great!)

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day_eight May 12 2008, 06:54:48 UTC

Thanks~ This was kind of difficult to work, but it seems like I did an okay job.

I hope your step-dad is doing okay. I remember you saying that your mom had gotten engaged, but I wasn't aware that they had gotten married. Well wishes to them both~

annieroo2 May 11 2008, 01:57:06 UTC

WOW! This was awesome!!

I would never have guessed this was your first Grim/Ulqu fic.

It didn't seem the least bit OOC to me. I thought you did a great job.

What a wonderful gift to give your friend. :)

day_eight May 12 2008, 06:53:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad that it was in character.

((And happy Mother's Day!))

annieroo2 May 14 2008, 23:52:51 UTC

Ugh! I am so behind in my email....

Happy (belated) Mother's Day to you too!!!!

kaphinated May 13 2008, 19:32:30 UTC

really good stuff Day - really interesting perspective. FPOV is really hard to pull off well but you excel yourself *thumbsup*

day_eight May 13 2008, 22:30:07 UTC

I used only write in FPOV, and then I had to switch to third because I joined the games. I'm not sure why it comes so easily to me - I actually have hard time with third person quite often. I'm backwards, I guess. XD

I'm so glad you liked it~ ♥