Last Chapter of AMC and Epilogue

[dawn_felagund]

Well, this is it: The last posting for AMC, the final chapter and a short epilogue by Tyelko to (hopefully) bring the story around in a circle, to close the year.

The final chapter, from Nelyo's PoV, you should be aware is rated adult for sex.

I have far less to say than I thought I would! AMC is far from over; besides more stories in the series

Comments

[rhapsody11]

Oh! You told me this week of Maglor's battle prowess... thank you, this really really was excellent. Oh so many things to say... but it read like a thrilling ride with a fiery... culmination *grin*

Macalaurë turns abruptly and yells, “Gah!” jumping in Tyelkormo’s direction, and Tyelkormo yelps before he can stop himself.

LOL I can so see Tyelko jumping in the air like a deer. So cute and so natural.

My mind fumbles to comprehend: the cuts and bruises on Macalaurë’s flesh; his secret meetings with Atar-but I wonder, is it real?

Honestly when I was responding to comments from you of your previous chapters, it somehow clicked, but more clicked. Foreshadowing in previous chapters. Everything suddenly made more sense :) Poor Macalaurë, I am certain there would have been days that he hardly could walk, but somehow I can see those two practising until it is absolutely perfect.

“My son Macalaurë has an extraordinary gift: the gift of a wraith. For he can fight without his eyes, by sound and feeling alone.”This sentence alone made me

[dawn_felagund]

LOL I can so see Tyelko jumping in the air like a deer. So cute and so natural.

Hehe, I thought of you, reading that part, with your two favorite Elves together. (As they rarely are in this story, it seems!) But I love devious!Maglor scaring his little brothers all the time. ;)

Honestly when I was responding to comments from you of your previous chapters, it somehow clicked, but more clicked.

I was wondering if people were making the connection...or at least wondering about Macalaure's strange injuries and sudden affection for his father.

Poor Macalaurë, I am certain there would have been days that he hardly could walk, but somehow I can see those two practising until it is absolutely perfect.

Me too. :) And I think Macalaure is probably prouder of that than the actual performance, that he can hold his own--"survive" so to speak--against Feanaro. *huggles Macalaure*

*then hands him back to you before you are forced to take drastic measures* ;)

And without hesitation my mind plunges into the sewers ;) Hmmm Maglor and blindfolds

[rhapsody11]

But I love devious!Maglor scaring his little brothers all the time.

I recall in a previous chapter (must be somewhere before chapter 20..) that even though it sometimes scares Tyelko, he loves his brother for telling him scary stories *grin* I think those two have an unspoken brotherly chemistry between them.

I was wondering if people were making the connection...or at least wondering about Macalaure's strange injuries and sudden affection for his father.

Well I also do recall (LOL, I wonder if this makes you re-read your own chapters again) that a while back, that Macalaurë, Nelyo and Fëanor were swordfighting in the woods (while the little ones played with wooden swords and this is pre Vingarië), that once Fëanor forced Maglor to fight with swords, he found his special way to fight with this weapon. I think at that moment things started that resulted in this asskicking sword fight! Dayum Maglor! Wuv ya!

*then hands him back to you before you are forced to take drastic measures* ;)

Nah, hugs are fine... *snogs Maglor*

I've

[rhapsody11]

Holy, this whole blindfold thing is completely distracting!

I meant: that once Fëanor forced Maglor to fight with swords blindfolded, he found his special way to fight with this weapon.

*rolls her eyes*

[digdigil]

*W* *O* *W* !!!!

Beautiful. Awesome. I am speechless.

I am crying. She came back to him.

And my little Findekáno saw the story out, with his hand in my wonderful Tyelkormo's.

So many wonderful things in this chapter. A beautiful Maitimo, a very sexy as always Macalaurë and a scary Fëanaro.

And I love the sweet epilogue.

I will definitely have to comment further at a later time when I am more coherent. Right now I'm gasping and I feel all dreamy from the awesome sentiment that is contained in this final chapter.

I have to go back and reread all my favourite parts.

Thank you for the past year, Dawn. It has been a blast and I know that the upcoming years will be even better!

Thank you.

[dawn_felagund]

This is the second time today that I've gotten all weepy over AMC. Alina had me all weepy and strugglin' before. Now you. ;)

Really, I cannot thank you--and everyone who's read this story--enough. I feel I've been given a gift I don't wholly deserve and can't really repay.

Except to keep writing because--when I think of it--AMC was the spark that lit the fuse that reminded me that I love writing, whether I'm published and famous or not. And AMC has reminded me of the power of words. :)

And thank you too for all your wonderfully kind words on this chapter. Posting Friday wouldn't be Posting Friday if Dawn didn't have some stupid, private angst over whether the chapter was "good enough," especially for this, that last chapter. (Hopefully I'll be less obnoxiously angsty by the time I'm up to posting my next long story! :^D)

Thank you thank you thank you! *big hugs*

[tarion_anarore]

Awwww. I'm glad Nelyo can stop angsting! :P

I still have 3 years of school left though! *Meaningful glance at Annawende* ;)

I love drunk!Vorondil!!

I don't know if it was anticipation in your writing style, or if it was just in my own mind, but I felt like I knew that Annawende would return before they even got to the festival. Hmmm.

I'm so sad this is over!!!!!!!! :( :( :( Even though you said it's not "over". But it was a wonderful...many!...months!

[dawn_felagund]

I wanted to ask you (before I start a rambling comment): Do you still want something posted next Friday? I know I said I'd come up with something, and I was thinking that maybe the beginning of my "Earwen stars in the Darkening of Valinor" novella might suffice?

Okay, on to rambling! :^D

I still have 3 years of school left though! *Meaningful glance at Annawende* ;)

Does that mean that she needs to have three years of sex with Nelyo? *cracks knuckles* I'm ready.

I love drunk!Vorondil!!

Are you in Vorondil's fan club? I can't remember. Anyway, drunk Vorondil is fun, better than normal!stuffy!Vorondil, although he is fun too.

This guy wants his own story, but I think I'm drawing a line in the sand on that one. Yes, she who gave meryth his own damned LJ is saying, "Stop!" to the muses. ;)

I don't know if it was anticipation in your writing style, or if it was just in my own mind, but I felt like I knew that Annawende would return before they even got to the festival. Hmmm.I was wondering if people thought that she would come back or not

[tarion_anarore]

Do you still want something posted next Friday? I know I said I'd come up with something, and I was thinking that maybe the beginning of my "Earwen stars in the Darkening of Valinor" novella might suffice?

Like I'd say no!!! Anything will suffice!! (Ok, so I definitely just tried to spell "suffice" beginning with the letter F...O.o)

Does that mean that she needs to have three years of sex with Nelyo?

It means that I hope Annawende doesn't mind Nelyo having three years of sex with ME helping me study. >;)

Are you in Vorondil's fan club? I can't remember. Anyway, drunk Vorondil is fun, better than normal!stuffy!Vorondil, although he is fun too.

Vorondil's fan club? No I don't think so. Maybe the drunk!Vorondil fan club...

This guy wants his own story, but I think I'm drawing a line in the sand on that one. Yes, she who gave meryth his own damned LJ is saying, "Stop!" to the muses. ;)

Uh oh...At least, since it's Vorondil, the world is unlikely to explode as a result. ;)

Actually, as the author even, I didn't know which way I wanted

[ann_arien]

*sigh*

What a way to end it! The last paragraph and the entire epilogue, for that matter, says "Don't go away! We'll be back!", to me. And I certainly hope they will.

I'm not going to get all sappy on you because if I do, I'll probably cry my heart out. *little sob* The best cure for it is going back and reading AMC all over again, which I will probably do after finishing this comment.

This final chapter was HOOOOOT!!! Holy Eru, it was a blast! They way Annawende made her come-back was do damn yummy! Bravo to her! (though I must say that I did not think she would come back. But the fact that she does means more heart-break in the future, regardless.) It felt so good to see Maitimo happy and radiant again. And, like Annawende says... so very beautiful...

BUT... Feanaor and Macalaure were out of this world. I know it's just a coreographed fight and you did not mean to create any kind of sexual tension... but DAMN!!! Feanaro is so hot my eyes poped out of my head and I melted into a puddle, on the floor.

He smiles viciously; the

[dawn_felagund]

What a way to end it! The last paragraph and the entire epilogue, for that matter, says "Don't go away! We'll be back!", to me. And I certainly hope they will.

Oh, yes, they will. :) AMC is just a small interlude between a lot of other stories. I don't even know why I started here except that I wanted to start with the characters and I find that easier to do in an unassuming, boring story. ;)

I knew that you would like that scene with Feanaro. I think it's impossible not to have sexual tension when he's around. He's a fiery, passionate person. (Why am I telling you this? You know!) And Feanor in armor doing those moves....

Okay, I'm back. Had to splash off with some cold water. ;^))

Of course, the "serious" reason behind that scene was that Feanor has pushed things to the very edge with regard to his defiance. But it was hella hott too!

Holly Eru! Blood, chocolate, whatever... Let me at him and I'll definitely lick it clean.

Hehe...Feanor in chocolate. Now I am a confectioner and about to start looking into what sorts of

[ann_arien]

I knew that you would like that scene with Feanaro. I think it's impossible not to have sexual tension when he's around. He's a fiery, passionate person. (Why am I telling you this? You know!) And Feanor in armor doing those moves....

*grabs a startled Feanaro*

...

...

*panting*

Whoa! I needed that! He's too hot for armor! And for clothing, too, for that matter.

Hehe...Feanor in chocolate. Now I am a confectioner and about to start looking into what sorts of chocolate I want to use. I never considered the possibility of testing it on Elves. >:^))

I'll tell you what. I'm sending Feany over so you can cover him in delicious chocolate. If you can refrain from... eating him (coating Nelyo in the same kind of delicious chocolate might help with this), wrap him up, tie him with a nice, red bow and send him back to me. Thanks in advance! >;)

Of course, the "serious" reason behind that scene was that Feanor has pushed things to the very edge with regard to his defiance. But it was hella hott too!Yep, the Elf is wicked, in more ways

[dawn_felagund]

I'll tell you what. I'm sending Feany over so you can cover him in delicious chocolate. If you can refrain from... eating him (coating Nelyo in the same kind of delicious chocolate might help with this), wrap him up, tie him with a nice, red bow and send him back to me. Thanks in advance! >;)

BWAH!! You have earned the naughty!icon for this one! This is simply precious. I have this image of dorky!confectioner!Dawn (complete with apron and bandana over hair) trying to get two ticklish, naked Elves to hold still to be painted with chocolate coating. *snickersnicker*

Yes, yes... please do. I can already envision the way I'll be grinning at the screen, while reading.

So can I. And I'm laughing like a mad fiend thinking about it! :^D

[digdigil]

ROFLMAO! This had to be the best exchange I've EVER read in an LJ! I think Alina said everything I wanted to say! The swordfight scene was awesome, and that Mac has to be the sexiest thing EVAH! I swear to Eru I am developing a serious case of the hots for him!

Alina, how about some Feany/Macslash??? I am sooo EVOL.

Now, I am one who thinks Vorondil is cute! I really like Vorondil, and Drunk!Vorondil was very cuddly, and all sexy and stuff going off with his girlfriend into the woods. I also liked in the last chapter when he jumped into the fountain in his gotchies. I kind of went, "Helloooo, Vorondil!"

Please, please, pretty please post something next Friday, please! Even if it's a daily drabble! (But try to make it longer than 100 words!)

Okay, Dawn, pleeeaassse?

{{{{{{{{{Love you!}}}}}}}}}

[dawn_felagund]

Mac has to be the sexiest thing EVAH! I swear to Eru I am developing a serious case of the hots for him!

*uncomfortable shifting* I thought so too.

When I reread this, about the white fighter's costume bound close to his body, I went, "Gaaaah..." and even forgot about Nelyo for roughly...erm...a half-second! Then it clicked that he's the equivalent of a 16-year-old in this, and I felt like an old perv. *snicker*

Just don't tell Fin.... ;)

Alina, how about some Feany/Macslash???

*sporfle* Gods, that needs to come with a beverage warning!

"Macslash" sounds like something for a computer. "New from Apple! The Macslash! Perfect for organizing your naked Elves, naughty costumes, sex toys, chocolate, and slashfic all in one handy PDA!" Or something like that! :^P

Please, please, pretty please post something next Friday, please!How would the first chappie from my Earwen fic that I am (still) writing for your Strong Women of Arda challenge

[ann_arien]

Alina, how about some Feany/Macslash??? I am sooo EVOL

YEEEEEES!!! PLEASE!

I was thinking about this when you asked me what I would like to for my b-day fic, but I thought it would be to much to ask. So forget about the Feany/Glorfindel request (or add it to the story, if you like), but Feany&Macalaure have really ignited in this AMC chapter and I want more! Pretty please.

There is only a little thing I want to ask you for, as far as my b-day fic is concerned. Don't make Feany evil and mean. Sure he can be as evol as he likes, but not evil. OK? That said, great big hugs to you and many thanks.

[digdigil]

No way will Feany be evil&mean! No way! (I don't think I could write him that way! It's such a stereotype for him and I'd like to try something a little different.)

*winks*