Last Chapter of AMC and Epilogue
Well, this is it: The last posting for AMC, the final chapter and a short epilogue by Tyelko to (hopefully) bring the story around in a circle, to close the year.
The final chapter, from Nelyo's PoV, you should be aware is rated adult for sex.
I have far less to say than I thought I would! AMC is far from over; besides more stories in the series ( Read more... )
The final chapter, from Nelyo's PoV, you should be aware is rated adult for sex.
I have far less to say than I thought I would! AMC is far from over; besides more stories in the series ( Read more... )
Hehe, I thought of you, reading that part, with your two favorite Elves together. (As they rarely are in this story, it seems!) But I love devious!Maglor scaring his little brothers all the time. ;)
Honestly when I was responding to comments from you of your previous chapters, it somehow clicked, but more clicked.
I was wondering if people were making the connection...or at least wondering about Macalaure's strange injuries and sudden affection for his father.
Poor Macalaurë, I am certain there would have been days that he hardly could walk, but somehow I can see those two practising until it is absolutely perfect.
Me too. :) And I think Macalaure is probably prouder of that than the actual performance, that he can hold his own--"survive" so to speak--against Feanaro. *huggles Macalaure*
*then hands him back to you before you are forced to take drastic measures* ;)
And without hesitation my mind plunges into the sewers ;) Hmmm Maglor and blindfolds...
>:^)))
Many many thoughts passed through my mind when I read this, instantly I had to think of Maglor and Maedhros, always fighting at each other side, even at the end (you know my LJ banner?).
Yes! And it is hard then to think of how Finwe must have felt, encountering Rumil again after a lot of years and seeing how he had suffered, just as Nelyo thinks of Macalaure when he hears Rumil's story.
I've found plotbunnies too in the Great Journey--the relationships between the kings of the Eldar especially--but those bunnies are content to nap in the bunnynest for now, luckily. ;)
Oh I can't believe that 52 chapters later (come to think of it a chapter per week), AMC is finished. So much has happened and, well we could ask you for many chapters more... but hurry up with the rest of it will ya!
Lol, next is Nerdanel/Feanor, the "prequel" to AMC. I will begin outlining that soon, and as soon as I have an idea for an opening chapter that grabs my fancy, I'll be off on that!
Then I'll probably try to go in order from there.
52 chapters amazes me. If I had kept to posting once per week, it would have been exactly a year. Once I revise, the chapters will probably change a bit, but that's a pretty cool coincidence nonetheless.
Thanks for this Dawn, what a ride!
Seconded! :^D And thank you! A year ago, I would have never imagined myself here right now....
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I recall in a previous chapter (must be somewhere before chapter 20..) that even though it sometimes scares Tyelko, he loves his brother for telling him scary stories *grin* I think those two have an unspoken brotherly chemistry between them.
I was wondering if people were making the connection...or at least wondering about Macalaure's strange injuries and sudden affection for his father.
Well I also do recall (LOL, I wonder if this makes you re-read your own chapters again) that a while back, that Macalaurë, Nelyo and Fëanor were swordfighting in the woods (while the little ones played with wooden swords and this is pre Vingarië), that once Fëanor forced Maglor to fight with swords, he found his special way to fight with this weapon. I think at that moment things started that resulted in this asskicking sword fight! Dayum Maglor! Wuv ya!
*then hands him back to you before you are forced to take drastic measures* ;)
Nah, hugs are fine... *snogs Maglor*
I've found plotbunnies too in the Great Journey--the relationships between the kings of the Eldar especially--but those bunnies are content to nap in the bunnynest for now, luckily. ;)
[whispers]Let's remain quiet around them for our sakes....[/whispers]
52 chapters amazes me. If I had kept to posting once per week, it would have been exactly a year. Once I revise, the chapters will probably change a bit, but that's a pretty cool coincidence nonetheless.
Well you wrote a year of this family... in 52 chapters, a year has 52 weeks... So I say: this was meant to be :) Very full circle!
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I meant: that once Fëanor forced Maglor to fight with swords blindfolded, he found his special way to fight with this weapon.
*rolls her eyes*
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I remember this part too! (And after 350K words, remembering what I've written is often an issue! :^P) Nelyo recalls how Macalaure is so easily defeated in swordfights with their father, how he is often hurt, and how--recently--even Tyelko can nearly beat him. Feanaro puts on the blindfold as an exercise; Nelyo does meh but Macalaure really rock 'n' rolls. And so it begins. :)
I think I wrote this part, actually, after rereading that. I doubt I would have remembered it on my own!
Well you wrote a year of this family... in 52 chapters, a year has 52 weeks... So I say: this was meant to be :) Very full circle!
Okay, now I feel daft because I totally did not think of that!
*twirls (blond) hair and grins vapidly* 8^D
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LOL Nelyo doing meh, just fiddling a bit with the straps of his bracers, shrugs a bit and suddenly goes woa! Now taht is a visual *grin*
I think I wrote this part, actually, after rereading that. I doubt I would have remembered it on my own!
Well with this epic...
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*gulps* No, no! Back away evol bunny! Not going there!
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I should have placed a disclaimer somewhere ;) Warning, this reader/writer might sic an evol bunny on you.
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