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Part Sixteen

datsun99 Apr 25, 2008 15:03

Hope people are still following the story!

I think I've had the worst writer's block I've ever had for the last fortnight. I've been literally deleting every sentence I write. Anyway, I was getting so frustrated I just sat down and scribbled this out, and hopefully it will move things forward a bit. I hope it doesn't disappoint, but by this point I ( Read more... )

Part Fifteen

datsun99 Apr 02, 2008 16:05

First, sorry for the delay. I won't bore everyone explaining where I was, but I can promise future updates to be nice and regular again. I hope people are still following the story!

Secondly: I have no beta, and this new chapter is essentially one giant scene, so am not sure about it. I didn't know how it was going to play out, so I just sat down ( Read more... )

Part Fourteen, ii) Wilson

datsun99 Mar 13, 2008 01:47

And here is Part Fourteen, ii) Wilson .

Kind of a concurrent chapter the last one, but with half of it written in a maddened dash this evening, so I apologise if it is riddled with typos. Hope this isn't trundling along to slowly for people; as ever, let me know:

Wilson tried to find the ceiling interesting. He wasn’t sure that he could move, and so ( Read more... )

Part Fourteen, i) House

datsun99 Mar 10, 2008 23:17

I finally had a night to write! Apologies for the delay, but part ii) is already in the works, so I'll be updating soon. Thanks to everyone who has been kind enough to comment on this story so far, I hope you enjoy this update.

(As a side note -- medicine? I did my research, but apologies if this section has some inaccuracies in it. Let me know and ( Read more... )

Part Thirteen

datsun99 Feb 28, 2008 01:47

Sorry for the delay guys; I felt a short update now might be better than a long one after another week, so I wrote half the chapter I planned out this evening, et voila. I hope you enjoy it; let me know. I've never really written a scene like this before, so I'd appreciate any crit or feedback.

House was far too close, scrutinising him, reaching out ( Read more... )

Part Twelve

datsun99 Feb 17, 2008 16:07

I am forced to blame everyone who is reviewing this story for the increasing length of the chapters! : )

Here is Part Twelve, written in a bit of a rush, but I hope it does the trick. As ever, I hope you enjoy it:

Despite his cocktail of meds, Wilson was still up before House the next morning, feeling more well-disposed towards the world than he ( Read more... )

Part Eleven

datsun99 Feb 11, 2008 00:31

Thanks to every who commented on the last chapter; sorry for the delay on this one - I have been wandering like a nomad for over a week now, which made reaching a computer tricky!

This is quite a quiet chapter, I don't know if people will find it a little odd. I just wrote it this evening because I thought the story could use a section like this as ( Read more... )

Part Ten

datsun99 Feb 02, 2008 00:21

Thanks to everyone who left feedback on the last chapter - it is always greatly appreciated! I hope people enjoy this update as much as the previous one:

With a certain amount of satisfaction, House drew a black, squeaking line through the word on the whiteboard.

"Alright, so it's not Lupus. We still need something that explains both the kidney fai ( Read more... )

Midnight Medicine: Chapter 17

datsun99 Jan 29, 2008 01:55

After a shamefully long delay, here is Chapter 17 of Midnight Medicine!

Thank you to everyone who is sticking with this fic, and especially to those who comment on it. I promise from chapter one it has had a plan and a plot that will be seen through to the finish, and hopefully with much more frequent updates than the last few, so please don't ( Read more... )

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Part Nine

datsun99 Jan 24, 2008 01:15

Here is the next chapter: Warning! It's quite a long one.

On a side note: I don't have a beta, and so I haven't been able to discuss this newest update with anybody, and I'm slightly nervous about it. I hope it doesn't seem too OOC. Let me know what you think; as ever, reviews are v. welcome, and I hope you enjoy it:

Wilson gazed around his ( Read more... )