Part Fifteen

[datsun99]

First, sorry for the delay. I won't bore everyone explaining where I was, but I can promise future updates to be nice and regular again. I hope people are still following the story!

Secondly: I have no beta, and this new chapter is essentially one giant scene, so am not sure about it. I didn't know how it was going to play out, so I just sat down

Comments

[alemyrddin]

Great! Not only they sorted out their differences but Wilson once again acted as House's muse!

Loved it, very IC throughout it.

In partiuolar I loved the boat metaphor, and these bits:
Tread carefully, Wilson decided, and just maybe, he’d be able to steer them safely forwards, because God knows, House certainly couldn’t manage it.
and then later, after House's foolish response
Yeah. If it were left up to House, they’d definitely be sunk. (quiet lol) *cheers for Wilson's foresight*

there's a typo here: suddenly it’s fingers were uncurling should be its

[datsun99]

Ah, thanks for pointing that out! I have a tendency to ignore punctuation and just hope it will sort itself out :)

Am glad you liked it, and Wilson taking charge of the conversation when House thinks its up to him. Thanks for commenting (and so quickly!)

[cb_eaglemaniac]

Weee, I'm so happy to see a new installment! =D I don't know what else to say besides I loved it, and of course am delighted the boys are back on track. xD

And I agree with the first comment: When Wilson = Muse, a story = Win. =P

[datsun99]

Am glad you enjoyed the update! Yep, the boys are back on track at last, which is nice - am getting exhausted writing all the angst :)

[xgraciela]

Lovely! It was so much IC that I thought I was watching the show!! :) I really enjoyed this chapter!

Thanks much for the great long update <3

[datsun99]

:) Am v pleased you thought it was IC! It did turn out longer than I anticipated, but glad it didn't feel to long. Thanks for commenting!

[bukabe16]

Love this story, it's so good that you chose to continue it^^ I like the writing and the characters seem real :)

[datsun99]

Continuing indeed, and hopefully with much more frequent updates, now. Thanks for commenting, am glad you enjoyed this chapter :)

[brandy71]

Glad you're back! I liked the way House showed remarkable restraint throughout that conversation - he's really trying to make things better.

[datsun99]

Thanks! I found it really hard, actually, deciding who's POV to write this section from, and as it settled on Wilson (I figured switching between them would just end up confusing myself!) so am glad that House's reactions sounded ok, becuase there obviously wasn't much explanation for them! Glad you are liking the story :)