Fic: Earnest Attempt

[dagnirovanaliel]

Title: Earnest Attempt
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: PG-ish
Pairing: Owen/Toshiko
Summary: Tosh and Owen go for drinks. Tosh is hopeful. Owen complains.
Spoilers: For Reset, I guess, ignoring the end.
Notes: TWO snow days this year! Which pretty much never happens. Except it’s more of an ice day. So… icy fic, with more fluff.

x-posted to torch_wood and torchwood_fic

Comments

[truthmaker]

I'm not sure if ignorance is bliss or if this is just blissful ignorance but either way I'm willing to overlook it. This is the way their relationship should have gone, not doing stupid things like killing one of them off just to manufacture tragedy.

I like your writing style. The conversations flowed appropriately and the characters were spot on.

[dagnirovanaliel]

Mostly... I just didn't feel in an angsty mood. The first draft did have an extra line at the end: "That's the way it is in her dreams", or something to that effect, but I eventually got rid of it because I feel like crap anyway.

Wow, thanks! I actually haven't tried writing this pairing before... I don't even ship them, just think they're cute together.

[adafrog]

awww...very cute, thanks.

[pinkfairy727]

Awww! Why couldn't we see this happen before then end of Reset?!

This is very sweet without being sickly, well done :c)

[copycatgirl]

This is perfect, exactly how it should have been. Silly end of Reset :(

[danaid_luv]

This was lovely & gentle & just as it should be--if I squint just so I can nearly forget about 'Reset'. *grumbles & kicks rock*

Haven't watched last night's ep yet so I'm putting stock in them fixing it. Bah.