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Standing Still 15/?

Feb 25, 2011 01:08

Title: Standing Still (15/?)
Author: CSIGeekFan
Rating: R (Language)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary: It's been five years since that fateful day that he walked away from Oakdale. Five years since he had his heart ripped to shreds. Five years since the ultimate betrayal.

A/N: Hallelujah! Another chapter! I hope you enjoy.
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luke, lure, reid, fanfic

Comments 21

rtruffles March 15 2011, 06:45:56 UTC

I finally caught up on this story!

I loved this chapter. I'm not sure what it is, but your writing is so emotional that it always makes me cry! (In the best way)

I loved that Luke gave in on Thanksgiving, I can't wait to see that!

I loved the conversation between Luke and Holden and I loved the use of the word 'cherished'. Luke deserves to be cherished!!!

I loved how you described his love for Noah, that's exactly how I see it. Young and sweet, but ultimately lacking in depth.

Great chapter!