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Standing Still 15/?

Feb 25, 2011 01:08

Title: Standing Still (15/?)
Author: CSIGeekFan
Rating: R (Language)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary: It's been five years since that fateful day that he walked away from Oakdale. Five years since he had his heart ripped to shreds. Five years since the ultimate betrayal.

A/N: Hallelujah! Another chapter! I hope you enjoy.
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luke, lure, reid, fanfic

Comments 21

f3d0ragirl February 25 2011, 11:50:57 UTC

:-( just wanna give ash a hug

csigeekfan February 25 2011, 14:04:09 UTC

Me too.

marsabi February 25 2011, 13:01:44 UTC

Sad one! The town needs a good slap on his behalf!

csigeekfan February 25 2011, 14:03:53 UTC

It'll be getting one. lol

sripley February 25 2011, 15:32:05 UTC

That was heartbreakingly beautiful, as most of this story has been. Loved having Ash & Holden talk, it was fantastic. <3

csigeekfan February 28 2011, 02:41:48 UTC

Thank you. I can't imagine Holden and Luke not being close, so the idea that they were so far apart led to this conversation. In the end, I think either Holden or Luke would work toward some sort of understanding. Even "Ash" would need this.

im_with_him84 February 25 2011, 16:15:20 UTC

Loved it.
Loved Ash/Holden conversation.

"With him I discovered that I could be needed and admired - that I could be loved because I have an opinion and a brain - even if I do something stupid. And I discovered that I could argue with someone and still have him look at me like I was the most important man alive."

*sigh* That was just beautiful... I'm glad that Ash really opened up to someone from his family, especially about his bitterness regarding everyone in Oakdale. Heck, I'm still bitter about them too...

csigeekfan February 28 2011, 02:42:55 UTC

I've always seen Holden as more than Luke's father - but something of a confidant. I think Holden solidified this opinion by being so open with him during his teenage years.

joann414 February 25 2011, 16:44:05 UTC

Wanna add a hug to the others. Poor Ash, so glad he and Holden are showing some semblance of regaining their relationship. Missing Reid here so much with Luke at the pond talking about him to his dad. Miss Reid period. Love this so much

csigeekfan February 28 2011, 02:44:14 UTC

I'm with you. I miss Reid, too. I miss the show. I wished ATWT had stayed on the air longer, just so we could watch Reid and Luke together. They would've been fun.