[Fic] "シャンバラへ行かない者" (Hei/Envy, R)

Apr 13, 2007 04:02

Title: シャンバラへ行かない者
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: Heiderich/Envy (yes, you read that right); implied one-sided Hei->Ed
Rating: Rish?
A/N: For fma_fuh_q; aka the best fic I have written that will only be read by two people ;)

Memory, such as it was, was a tattered tapestry. )

fma_fuh_q, fma, r, fanfic, hei/envy, challenge

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cryogenia April 14 2007, 05:43:46 UTC
Glad you liked it <3 It was a hard thing to do and I am glad people can enjoy this silliness :)

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truly_wished April 14 2007, 04:32:00 UTC
Huh. So, I read it three times and it's been sitting here in front of me since you posted ( ... )

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cryogenia April 14 2007, 05:43:11 UTC
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked this - it was difficult to write but I am so glad to have attentive readers like you who actually stop and see what I wanted to do with it ;_;

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elfinragdoll April 14 2007, 17:19:58 UTC
Oh...my god. Reading through this, I knew it was laced with dangerously beautiful possibilities, and in concluded in the most glorious way...

A feeling blossomed in my chest, it was so heavy with feeling. I can honestly say that I have never felt such an impact from a fic before, it was tangible. Especially the aspect of two beings on such very far opposite sides of the universe having one thing in common that has that much influence, the ability to change and take back and start over everything...

Like some of the others, I've always held a fascination with the nature of the Gate, and the way you personified it made it as real as the God and the Devil that I've always been brought up to believe in (though I'm not sure I do now).

you don't even understand that there is no devil - hell is OTHER PEOPLE!

Something more true cannot have been said, and the memories shared btwn Envy and Alfons to illustrated it painfully. It was a pain I could taste. And you are marvelous, marvelous, marvelous.

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cryogenia April 14 2007, 22:18:31 UTC
Thanks - glad you liked it. It was a hard sell to get Envy and Alfons together, and I am happy it worked for some :)

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cryogenia April 14 2007, 22:18:11 UTC
Thanks <3 I felt the same :)

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velvet_mace April 15 2007, 18:05:54 UTC
Wow, this Envy/Hei fusion is very interesting. I was not expecting you to take the story this direction, but it has me fascinated with all it's possibilities. I'm I bit worried for Ed here. Actually Al too...

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cryogenia April 20 2007, 04:23:56 UTC
Thanks...yeah, Heivy is not an entirely good thing for the Elrics, er f^^

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