[Fic] "シャンバラへ行かない者" (Hei/Envy, R)

[cryogenia]

Title: シャンバラへ行かない者
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: Heiderich/Envy (yes, you read that right); implied one-sided Hei->Ed
Rating: Rish?
A/N: For fma_fuh_q; aka the best fic I have written that will only be read by two people ;)

Comments

[fallia]

I think this is probably one of the best things you've written. It sucked me in from the first sentence and swept me along until it was over, and my heart went out to Hei for his feelings for Ed and the desperate way Envy milked him for every last memory, argh. <3333 I don't know what else to say other than that. Awesome. I love this; it's amazing.

[cryogenia]

I am glad you liked it <3 I am also pleasantly surprised that more than two people read it XDDD I was thinking Hei/Envy = readers run screaming for sure XDDD

[militsa]

[militsa]

[cryogenia]

<333 I love your fic so much. And yeek, poor Hei...in some ways, I suppose he is glad that Envy got to him first here?

...you know you're really screwed when you have to say that XD;

[nomdeplume13]

This is great. I don't think I've ever read anything like this. I loved the moment when the two individuals started to become one, both realizing their abandonment and desire to really live. It's amazing, really.

[cryogenia]

Thanks, glad you liked it - psychic sex is really hard to write XD;

[jenioctavia]

...wow.
I'm actually DIZZY from reading this. That was...so amazingly intense, it was hard to even look away. I was leaning forward, and by the end of it Joe was looking at me funny because I think I was mouthing the words as I read. XD
I can't even go in to just how...insane and awesome that was. So much emotion in one place, one fic...
You're incredeble. You really are. <333

and zomg Heimunculus. <3 I have this urge to draw that, now, but I have NOIDEA what the clothes would look like. ^^;

[cryogenia]

Thank you, glad you liked it :) And for the record, Heimunculus looks exactly like Heiderich except with slightly pointy teeth and purple eyes - he starts off wearing Envy's clothes, but uh, I think he is sane enough to change into better clothes XD

[jenioctavia]

Hmmm...
Wow. That sounds far sexier than it should. :3 I must draw this now~

[innate]

...I am going to CRY. I typed out a long crit and FUCKING LJ ATE IT.

When I calm down I'll rewrite it. T_T But for now ♥

[cryogenia]

Awww...no worries, I'm just glad you even got through this mess of a fic XDDDD

[innate]

Mess? If by mess you mean sweet sweet chaos then yes!

More or less, the essence of it was totally absorbing. I used to love Envy a lot but I kind of drifted to other characters along the way, like Alfons and Wrath and so forth. This really rekindled my previous adoration for him, though.

You captured both of their voices and their fears perfectly. I heard it and saw it all in my head while reading, just like watching the anime, which was pretty damn wicked. The scenery was described superbly.

And the ending just made way for crack!possibility that makes my plot bunnies squee.

[cryogenia]

<3 Thanks, glad you liked it. I was never an Envy fan by nature, but writing these fics with him in make me have a new appreciation for him. I am glad you liked him :)