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crowgirl13 August 31 2011, 17:31:10 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Especially considering that that second half was, somehow, the old draft. /o\ Thank you so much for pointing that out to me, and for sticking with the story despite the errors.

Thank you for reading and for commenting! ♥

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julorean August 31 2011, 21:10:54 UTC
HAI AGAIN. ILU.

oh, this is just as satisfying as I knew it would be!

"You're naked. You're naked and you're sitting in Mikey's lap," Gerard says.
"Wouldn't be the first time," Mikey says, his voice pitched low.
LOOOOOOOOOOL! Who *wouldn't* want a naked Bob in their lap? ;)

He’s starting to get over his shock and looks fascinated in a way that only spells trouble.
Frank=trouble, this is not news. XD

"This conversation requires pants. And maybe booze. Definitely pants, though."
LOLOLOLOLOL

"Bob, you have a tail," Frank says.

Bob freezes. He knows that tone. Growling, he turns to look at Frank over his shoulder. "If you touch my tail, Iero, I will tear off your hands."

Then he stalks into the building.

"Is it disturbing that I found that hot?" Mikey asks.

"I don't know about you, but I'm disturbed that you said that," Gerard grumps. It is a very reluctant sort of grumping though, if the mingled scent of pheromones was anything to go by.

Yeah, Bob thinks, this is definitely the sort of conversation that requires pants. ( ... )

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crowgirl13 September 1 2011, 17:49:29 UTC
HAI THAR. XD

Oh man, you comment makes me so happy. The humor in Bob's Great Reveal is one of the parts I dithered over including the most; I am SO HAPPY that that's what grabbed you enough to quote. *beams*

Killjoys wolves is my extra special happy place, ngl. And yeah, wolf!Bob would be the absolute best to cuddle with. :3 Oh boy! Thank you! Delightfully creepy is what I was aiming for. Ah, you whole comment has me chair dancing, full of glee.

I could read a million more words of this. :)
Well, I don't know if I have a *million* more words of it, but there's definitely more in the works, at least two longer fics. :D

I'm so, so glad that you enjoyed this! ♥

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julorean September 2 2011, 04:38:35 UTC
there's definitely more in the works, at least two longer fics
YES! \o/

Killjoy!wolves is now one of my happy places too. XD I'm getting fun little scenes in my head, where all five are frolicking together in wolf-form. Ray has the prettiest fur. Frank is chasing his tail. Then he and Gerard lick each other's fur (do wolves do that? IDK, I'm more a cat person. >.>) Then all if them cuddle up in a big warm puppy pile. ♥

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badblood August 31 2011, 23:35:11 UTC
Really enjoyed this. The word-building (for Bob) was awesome,as was the characterisation. Really liked the Bob/Mikey stuff, too. Great job!

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crowgirl13 September 1 2011, 17:32:24 UTC
Thank you! It's great to hear that the world-building worked so well for you. A lot of time went into plotting the background, so it's gratifying, knowing that it's effective. :D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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tempore September 1 2011, 01:41:40 UTC
Bob has to stifle a bark of laughter at the tone.
This line made me ridiculously happy, beyond all the ridiculously happy I am that this is finally posted. :) YAY! Celebrations are in order, because you nailed it, once again.

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crowgirl13 September 1 2011, 17:56:51 UTC
I take your ridiculously happy and raise you one gleeface. :D Sweet! I'm psyched that worked out; I cut and pasted that sentence three times before posting. Funny how it's always the humorous/sly punny bits that I want to cut. i swear I didn't used to be this angst-focused...

YAY INDEED! Your happiness makes me exponentially more happy! :D :D :D Thank you so, so much for all the shiny ideas and encouragement/neurosis wrangling. I love your face and your big brain and all the rest of you. *tackleglomps*

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tempore September 2 2011, 00:23:47 UTC
:D *catches you* Weeee! Anytime, my dear. Anytime.

I think that bit provided just a lovely bit of insight into both the slight hysteria of surviving by the skin of one's teeth, but also it's natural to his nature, so I'm really glad you kept it.

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hammerhead22 September 1 2011, 03:13:31 UTC
♥ x eleventybillion!

I cannot even begin to be articulate about how much I love this story. I think my favorite part is Bob's focus on his sense of smell, it's such a wonderful and truly canine touch.

Moar pleez?

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crowgirl13 September 1 2011, 18:08:52 UTC
EEEE! YAY!
Your comment makes me so happy.
[I was a little nervous, wondering what you'd think about all of ~this.]

Oh, thank you for singling out that detail. It's tricky business, walking that line between man and wolf descriptions, but the scent issue melds the two relatively gracefully. It's also one of the werewolf tells that makes the most sense to me - I gleeful that it resotanted with you too!

Moar yes. :D I've already promised turlough that I'd finish the sequel and there's at least one other story in there too, tentatively a prequel. There's a goodly chunk of Brian POV written. :D

EEEE! *twirls you*

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hammerhead22 September 2 2011, 02:42:18 UTC
You did such an amazing job with Bob's inner wolfness! I spent a lot of the story wanting to scritch Bob's scruff and let him know that everything is going to be okay.

I can't wait for the Schechter POV. I ♥ Brian more than any bandom character other than Bob Bryar himself.

YOU ROCK!!

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