How James Potter Wore Lily Evans Down: Chapter Four

[cristofle]

Title: How James Potter Wore Lily Evans Down (4/?)
Author: Cristofle (Liz)
Characters: James/Lily in the Marauder era; ensemble friendly for that time. Will include Sirius, Lupin, Wormtail, and Snape among others, including future Death Eaters as well as Order members.
Summary: "She never would have believed a year ago that James Potter could so

Comments

[melissa_35]

Okay, that was the most depressing chapter I've ever read. Amazing, but depressing. Poor Lily! :( I feel bad for James too, but Lily didn't ask someone else out.

Sirius is perfection. “I was trying to save you from humiliation in those young, carefree days,” Sirius sighed. “However, my boy is all grown up now- well, still an idiot, but all grown up- and I am trying to HELP you. You don’t want to date Susan Flannery.” LMAO.

[melissa_35]

Also, STAG AND DOE.

[cristofle]

I think that's the best nod to shipperdom, actual canon shipperdom, that Jo ever gave me. LOL.

[cristofle]

LOL! Thank you, I try to do teenage Sirius, whom I love SO much, justice:D

[jjm_7]

He hadn’t said more than ‘hello’, ‘good night’, ‘please pass the toast’, and ‘thank you’ to her.
Look at that, they're already married.

Anyway, I'm too tired to post a long review, but I have to say: I LOOOOOOOOVED this chapter. I feel so bad for Lily, and James needs to listen to Sirius. God, I love Sirius. That bitch Susan needs to die. No, she seems cool, but James and Lily break my heart. :( I guess I'm kinda mad at him for acting the way he's acting, but it's understandable, cause she really hurt him. The last part with the patronus was incredibly touching and sad. :( The stag and the doe- it was supposed to be like that, and she didn’t understand until it was too late. *slits wrists* lol

[cristofle]

I remember in OotP, Kingsley seemed to know James ("He looks exactly like James, Remus") and he seeeeeems to be a similar age to Sirius and Remus, so I decided to go ahead and make him their exact age and of COURSE, Kingsley would be in Gryffindor. Because Kingsley is awesome.

[bigdreams1111]

“Come on; the house elves are the most lovely little things, let’s go have an éclair.”

MARRY ME, SIRIUS.

Yeah, way to depress the hell out of me. Poor Lily. Poor James. Why do they have to keep hurting eachother! Sigh. UPDATE SOON.

[cristofle]

I was watching that movie last night. *randomly looking at your avatar* Little Rupert is so cute.

I will!:)

[cristofle]

Thanks!:)