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chibiariane November 18 2009, 17:15:32 UTC
*picks up her heart pieces*
Your fics are getting sadder and sadder. And I love your fics. And I can SO imagine this to be canon. Because I would love it.
The 'Now go.' line killed me.
I can't believe that Peter lost his beloved brother at the age of 29. He has to live about 50 years without Nathan. I can't imagine Peter without Nathan...
This fic touched my heart, again.
*cries*

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crashgirl82 November 18 2009, 20:16:29 UTC
In Heroes time, it's still 2007, I believe. The Heroes wiki lists Nathan Petrelli's death year as 2007, so...

If it's about to be Thanksgiving, it's Nov 2007.

Peter was born Dec 23, 1979. He is about to turn 28.

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just have to note.. moonmaiden34 November 19 2009, 05:02:01 UTC
everytime i see someone else who follows the true heroes timeline my faith in humanity is renewed.

few weeks + few months + a few more weeks =/= 3+ years.
writers please take note of this.

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crashgirl82 November 18 2009, 20:21:54 UTC
I'm also glad you enjoyed the story. I hope this is the last sad one. They really hurt to write. But after these last few episodes of Heroes, and since we know how it ends, my mind wants to keep going and get the mourning out of my system.

The next thing I hope to post will be NC-17 rated. :)

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commen_sense November 21 2009, 10:06:44 UTC
the first thing i did when i got the chance is open your journal and read this. omg!! so heartbreaking. the emotions were so raw and in character. especially nathan. i loved the portrayal. ah, my poor heart is breaking :(

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crashgirl82 November 22 2009, 10:24:34 UTC
the emotions were so raw and in character. especially nathan.

Why doesn't that surprise me? Anytime I try to write something from Peter's POV it seems that I always am able to do better by Nathan.

This wasn't how it started, you know. I loved Peter first. Why Nathan became my favorite, I'm still trying to figure out.

I try to tell myself many different reasons, but I can never convince myself of the definitive.

It just happened. And it sucks so much.

:(

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commen_sense November 22 2009, 11:22:10 UTC
i understand. i never loved nathan this much until fugitives. i guess its because they gave his character so much depth and made him so easy to sympathize with... *sigh* fuck the writers for killing him :(

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crashgirl82 November 22 2009, 11:42:19 UTC
This is why I feel like I have nothing to look forward to in January. If the writers fucked this shit up so bad by taking Nathan away from us, what makes us think they'll do right by Peter in letting him mourn? They're not going to do it justice. I'm so fucking pissed. Nathan was worth sixteen motherfucking Mohinders, okay? They needed to keep him, but kill Nathan? What the fuck? (second stage here. anger. but I think my stages go differently cause I use anger to block out all the other ones.)

If I'm not pissed off, I'm upset. God damn this shit.

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sapphire17 November 27 2009, 19:05:56 UTC
“No, Peter,” Nathan said, his voice low, almost pleading now. “Don’t defile what we had…by giving it to him.”

I really think you hit the nail on the head with that statement. I picture that this is exactly what Nathan would say to Peter in that situation.

Beautiful fic. You write canon better than the show does!

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crashgirl82 January 28 2010, 07:19:55 UTC
Wow, I'm so sorry I never responded to your comment. Yes, I definitely believe with all my heart Nathan would say exactly that.

Beautiful fic. You write canon better than the show does!

This compliment means the world to me, really. Thanks so much for reading!

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