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moonmaiden34 November 18 2009, 04:08:12 UTC
wibble*

*please note, more will be included later, words fail me now.

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crashgirl82 November 18 2009, 06:11:47 UTC
You know something? That's the second "wibble" that this story got. I never knew that something I could write was able to make people cry. It should be a hint to me: if I cry writing it, then others will too.

Anxiously awaiting more of your incoherence. *hugs*

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moonmaiden34 November 19 2009, 05:17:42 UTC
i am glad that there is another wibble. this deserves countless wibbles.

i love how yr peter is still not accepting this turn of events. and how nathan's heart is clearly breaking with his own realization. and the promise of epic!showdown!throwdown!ikeelyounow!fight with sylar. elegantly addressed in the end.. i loved this..

But Peter would come back.

Nathan may have sent him away, but he knew he would return, to take what Sylar had taken from him.

His brother’s life, in exchange for his.

this needs to be real. and if the writers cant pull this off themselves, i will just have to take a page out of the pattened nathan petrelli drinker's playbook and drink till i cant remember that this was not the true end.

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crashgirl82 November 19 2009, 05:30:29 UTC
I had such trouble with that last line. I meant it to say that Peter would come back and kill Sylar because he killed Nathan.

But I think maybe my unconscious mind wanted it to be left open to interpretation...that Peter would come back and make Sylar stay as Nathan? I don't know.

But I'm making you a Nathan-with-the-shotgun icon as we speak.

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petrellilover November 18 2009, 04:29:17 UTC
I really hope that November 30th is epically exciting & tearful at the same time.

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crashgirl82 November 18 2009, 06:08:45 UTC
So do I. I want to cry like I did when Peter showed Nathan that yes, he really could fly.

I want to cry like I did when Nathan died at the hotel.

Nathan Petrelli deserved so much better than what the Heroes writers gave him, season after season. He'd better have a beautiful funeral with all the bells and whistles.

And Peter better get the time to mourn that he will so desperately need. Oh boys.

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petrellilover November 18 2009, 09:24:12 UTC
I want to hear Ave Maria at the funeral.

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sakura_no_mi November 18 2009, 05:35:12 UTC
*hugs you tight*

This was so heart-wrenching and so well written.

“I love you more than life, Peter.”

Your dialogue puts canon to shame.

I know you don't think that Peter is necessarily in denial, but he's definitely in... something. I call it the "not listening" stage. I know, because I'm like him. When I don't want to believe something, I lie to myself, I rationalize, I do just about anything I can to protect my heart from the truth for as long as I can. It's like hiding under the blanket when you're scared of the monsters under the bed. I know, mature right. How old are Peter and I again?

*sigh*

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crashgirl82 November 19 2009, 01:10:57 UTC
Your dialogue puts canon to shame.

Aww...thanks. I'm glad you think so.*blushes* My dialogue between them is my favorite part about Nathan and Peter. Oh, not to mention, the hot brother!sex.

I call it the "not listening" stage.

You're absolutely right. Peter isn't even considering the possibility that ANY of this bullshit he's been hearing from ANYONE is true. Nope. This is what made me write this fic.

Peter's like, That's Nathan. There is another explanation., and that makes it all even worse.

Sorry, Pete. It's over, baby. Your world is about to come crashing down. *hugs him*

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coldryuuza November 18 2009, 06:55:09 UTC
*lip wobbles*

NATHAN!!! *breaks down* He definitely shows his best qualities when he's being Peter's big brother. I think my heart broke as Peter described how Nathan would rearranged his events around Peter <3

Definitely like, no, love this better than from what Peter displayed on the show. So heavy in the denial stage.

*mems*

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crashgirl82 November 18 2009, 07:37:01 UTC
Mems? Aww. Glad you enjoyed it!

what Peter displayed on the show

What Peter displayed on the show, IMHO, is worse than denial. He's not even listening. He isn't even considering the possibility that Nathan is really gone. Not even though he saw Nathan's body. Not even though Nathan is already getting it. So very Nathan of him, even in Sylar's body. That makes me a little bit happy.

Peter is, unfortunately, pre-Stage One.

It's gonna be bad when it finally hits. I'm going to cry so, so hard. I really love Nathan Petrelli.

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crashgirl82 November 19 2009, 01:02:35 UTC
*smooshes them together*

Interesting choice of words...there was another idea that I had...maybe after all this is over, I'll write it. AU is a Petrelli fangirl's best friend now, as I have said before.

Thanks for reading!

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