might as well pray, 'cause I'm on my knees anyway (Bones, 1/1)

May 23, 2009 17:26

Summary: A continuation of the finale.
Rating: T
A/N: My first Bones fic, and it's finale!fic, because I am a lemming. I hope that I haven't inadvertently copied anyone and that this fic, like Booth, is made of very good stuff.

Everyone left, and she stayed. )

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teener May 24 2009, 07:26:06 UTC
oh, i love this! the ending was perfect. i chuckled out loud when i read "i don't know what that means" coming from booth. if/when you write more bones stuff, i can't wait to read it! ♥

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countrygirl_914 May 25 2009, 17:07:17 UTC
Thanks! I can't be the first person to have Booth saying that, am I? The irony is just so delicious.

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tempertemper May 24 2009, 08:35:21 UTC
Yay! Welcome to writing for Bones.. please stick around, this was beautiful :)

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countrygirl_914 May 25 2009, 17:07:56 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed. And I'll try to stick around. It all depends on how my muse is feeling.

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tempertemper May 25 2009, 20:46:25 UTC
You're welcome, I'm glad and I so know how that one goes :)

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nickeldreams May 24 2009, 15:58:25 UTC
Wow, that was beautiful.

Everyone left, and she stayed.
Story of her life.
and
“I’m Bones.”
But if he didn’t know her anymore, was she? Really?
-I loved both those two lines. They sum up everything she is perfectly.

She could piece together his skeleton, but she couldn’t fill the holes in his memories.
-So sad. It's one of those lines that reminds me of how much Booth's forgetting would affect them.

I really loved this. Really amazing first Bones fic, too. ♥

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countrygirl_914 May 25 2009, 17:08:31 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad everyone is enjoying this.

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enigmaticblues May 24 2009, 18:54:11 UTC
This was a powerful piece. Brennan speaking to her reflection in the mirror, her thoughts re: being helpless, her fears. Very well done.

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countrygirl_914 May 25 2009, 17:08:44 UTC
Thanks!

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hippiebanana132 May 24 2009, 22:29:36 UTC
This is lovely =)

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countrygirl_914 May 25 2009, 17:09:01 UTC
Glad you enjoyed. :)

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