Concrit meme

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JE CONCRIT MEMEWhat the name implies. How to do it

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Please, go ahead.

Re: P

[marlenem]

I'm amazed by your talent to write angst and come up unusual/weird ideas. Actually, one of the first names that come to my mind when I pimp (angst) writers to friends is you. I know you asked for constructive criticism, but there really is nothing I could criticize rn. Maybe you'll have more luck with somebody else xD I hope you won't run out of fic ideas any time soon :D

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[prologuesized]

Mostly I'm worried that my fics might start sounding a bit repetitive (meet -> fall in love -pattern), actually... but I'm glad you consider the ideas unusual/weird because that's a good thing, right?

But, um, I'm feeling kinda giddy and honoured. Thank you for pimping me. I appreciate it *bow*

...Thank you :< ♥ Hmm, I hope I'll get luckier with my critcism fishing with someone else then XD

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[marlenem]

I don't think you need to worry about that. The universes/situations you put the characters into differ so much that the repetitiveness you're talking about doesn't make them boring/flat at all. Though trying out different kind of situations (like trying to prevent a relatonship from falling apart, or coping with a break-up) surely would get rid of your worry ^^ You should do it if you feel bad about the repetitiveness ♥

Re: P

[prologuesized]

Hmm. It's out of my comfort zone, but I think it could be a good expansion. I'll see if I'll manage to put something like that together at some point :3 I'm feeling kind of hopeless with the entire idea because I don't know how it works but writing it more should teach me! Thanks for the suggestions ♥ I really appreciate them!

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[bellemelody]

I love your fics and your ideas)) they are always very interesting)) One of my fav you fic is Orchids))
and I want to tell you my complain in your fic about pirates I want more love line))

I love your amazing fics and I always happy to read new ones)))

Re: P

[prologuesized]

Oww, thank you ♥ Orchids was kinda a cracky experiment... I'm glad you liked it, though. And I have to admit that PIRATES!! (you meant that, right?) had surprisingly little romance compared to what I planned (all the other characters and stuff kind of took over and smut didn't really feel right to write there -> less romance on that part too) so um yeah XD I kind of write what feels fitting and if I force something somewhere it starts feeling awkward and I worry it'll drag the fic down or something XD

Thank you for still reading them ♥ I like seeing your comments :3

Re: P

[bellemelody]

I love this story about pirates and Akame characterization was really great)) that was interesting and fresh)))
will wait for more your stories)))

Re: P

[prologuesized]

I'll definitely write more once I get time and inspiration! 8

Re: P

[prologuesized]

*sighs* What to say about your work? That always affect me. In one way or another, I just feel completely absorbed and transformed by your works. The simplicity of most of the scenarios and generally from the plot is always elevated by the complicity of the emotions and the characters and the descriptions of their surroundings. It creates a work of art, it creates a reproduction of life itself and that's why it just can't be ignored or passed as a simple fanfiction.

Is this even considered a concrit?? xDD

Re: P

[prologuesized]

Haha, I don't know XD You're not really pointing out flaws but pointing out the good stuff is sort of constructive too, isn't it?

But, um, thank you ♥ .____. I'm really happy you see my writing that way. It means a lot to me, because... well... making the writers feel is the most important thing, right? For me it is anyway. So, if you feel that way about my writing I'm really happy. Also, about the "simplicity of plot" - this is one of my flaws, I can't plan ahead which means my plots really can get simple so... the emotion thing and everything is my way of trying to compensate the loss XDDD I should maybe take a moment and think about that too (although I'm not one of the brightest people around so making very complex plots would probably confuse myself which would be really bad...)

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[prologuesized]

You already write pretty well! I must say that I am amazed at how you can write conflicting feelings; it's like your fics are bipolar. I mean that in a good way. ;) The use of language is effective and I like your use of imagery as well. :)

Re: P

[prologuesized]

I kind of see people as potentially bipolar. That not everything is straight and clear. So I guess it somehow goes with the characters as well. I'm happy you mean it in the good way XD ...I wonder if people aren't really like that after all... I do my best to make my characters sort of complete people. So. Um. Yeah.

But thank you. I'm glad you're satisfied then? And I'm sorry for rambling. Trying to get my own head clear while pondering about stuff.

Re: P

[prologuesized]

I really love your fics, so much :) I could read them all day.
I love the spiritual feeling of a lot of them; they're easy to get lost in and it's really nice. <3
I have little criticism at all, really, maybe that you should write more epic fic? XD
Just know you have my endless support and worship :D Keep up the awesomeness!

Re: P

[prologuesized]

Thank you very much ♥ And hmm, more epic fic... I guess I really have to work harder on plotlines then XD I'll really try to make a more epic fic some day :<

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[prologuesized]

I meant 'more' as in another XD I'm not that harsh. You've already written epic fic, I just think I speak for many when I say there should be another one soon <3