Concrit meme

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JE CONCRIT MEMEWhat the name implies. How to do it

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[anonymous]

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[alexxasick]

here http://alexxasick.livejournal.com/

please help :)

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[anonymous]

I haven't read that much of your Fics. But I liked what I've read!! Sometimes I don't really agree about your characterizations (for example about Kanjani), but that's my personal opinion and taste. Beside that I totally like your work! Please keep on writing!! <3

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[alexxasick]

thank you, could you please tell me what would you do different? what in my characterizations is off?

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[bellemelody]

Tell me what you think)))

bellemelody @ belle-plume

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[anonymous]

Your plot have improved a lot. It was slightly childish before but now it has mature up. The flow of your story also are much more polish now. Thanks for sharing all your work. Keep up the good work

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[bellemelody]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!

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[crazyfaucet]

I'd like your honest opinion please! I really would love to improve greatly!

crazyfaucet fic index is in the intro post

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[anonymous]

I haven't read too many fics from you, but from what I've read I think you've made some improvements over time. I remember reading one of your earliest fics -- I think it was one where Ryo abused Shige -- and after some point I had to stop reading because there were so many eyebrow-raising points. You have gotten better since, but I think there's still a lot of room for improvement. Here are a few examples from your fic "A Mis-."

It started with just a small kiss. One square on the lips under the mistletoe. After it happened they turned away from each other, their faces bright as the lights flashing on the Christmas tree. The smiling faces of their delighted friends like the star on the top. Jin never thought he’d have to help Nishikido Ryo with something like love but Tomohisa was glad they could play a role. No matter how small it was since the couple were much too shy to admit their feelings for the other

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[crazyfaucet]

First of all - THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! I really appreciate it, getting concrit! It makes me really happy

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[elanielyn]

elanielyn @ onionlullabys

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[anonymous]

Love your fics, a good and bad point is that you always leave me wanting more :D whether it's your drabbles I wish were oneshots or wanting the oneshots to be multi-chaps :))))) I also love the pairings you write, especially your HayaRyu and Pin ^^ and of course plain old Akame XD

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[anonymous]

Your smut is the best!!! Your Kinki fics!!! I love them!!!!