I haven't read that much of your Fics. But I liked what I've read!! Sometimes I don't really agree about your characterizations (for example about Kanjani), but that's my personal opinion and taste. Beside that I totally like your work! Please keep on writing!! <3
I am obsessed with your smut! They're well-written and them being more than sex and having feelings laced on them no matter how casual they are is very impressive. Your Stray series is easily one of my favorite NC-17 chaptered fics.
My only critique is to polish your fics up a bit. There are some spelling and grammar issues here and there and I think you could be better with a beta.
Thank you so much <3 ahh you mean 1st person? I agree it can be confusing, I will try and work on that; it's just that I think if I don't write in 1st person it will be even more confusing.
I really like the way you are writing, and you really write great things in the personal perspective. For me that's much harder to write than "normal" stories.
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please help :)
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My only critique is to polish your fics up a bit. There are some spelling and grammar issues here and there and I think you could be better with a beta.
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I'm between betas right now lets see how it works from now on
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Honest opinion please because I really would like to improve as I know I am not the best writer.
Compliments and Constructive criticism are loved.
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Just sometimes 1st sight is confusing.
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ahh you mean 1st person? I agree it can be confusing, I will try and work on that; it's just that I think if I don't write in 1st person it will be even more confusing.
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But beside that I love what you write!
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thank you :D
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Keep on writing, my dear! ^____^
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Hearing that form one of my favourite writers really motivates me!
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