[Somewhere on the outskirts of camp, there is a scrawny-looking boy staring up at ZEX’s Intruder. He’s so surprised by the alien spaceship that he doesn’t even notice the laptop and shotgun lying by his feet.]
Concrit goes here! If there is anything that bothers you about the way I play Jack or if you think of any ways that I can improve the way I play him, or just anything you want to comment on about it, drop a comment here!