Fic - "You May Be Right"

[colonel_bastard]

Title: You May Be Right
Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Hal Stewart, Wayne Scott (Metro Man). Megamind.
Word Count: 3,718
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Just an average weekday morning at Scott Manor.
Warnings: Crude language, sex-talk.
Notes: As promised/threatened, a sequel to You Never Can Tell! I can't get enough of these two guys who get each other

Comments

[legendaryair]

Aww, oh man Colonel, I love this fic. Like a lot. <3

First off, I gotta comment on the fact that Hal's finally started learning how to be "good"--not fakey-goody-two-shoes good, but following-through-on-your-promises good, maybe even caring-about-Wayne's-feelings good. And Wayne's learning to take some time off and just breathe in the pleasures of little triumphs and domesticity (and caring for two before taking on the whole city). You do three-dimensional so well, I just love it!! n__n <3

(Not to mention that I always have to wake my husband up in the morning, too, and give presentations to people who don't necessarily want to hear them. So I can relate. XP)

P.S. BACON LOL <3

[colonel_bastard]

Awww, I'm so glad! <3

I really appreciate the note about how you can see both of them changing--- that's one of my favorite things about this pairing, how they're both slowly learning a new way to live and be happy. Huzzah for three-dimensionality! :D

And the fact that you can relate the situation is, in itself, an encouraging note on the authentic domesticity of the pairing, haha. ^__^

P.S. It was a historic day when I realized that I was an adult and could cook myself bacon whenever I wanted. A historic day, indeed. XD

[alpha_centari27]

They really do make a cute couple.

Mount blanket...I can totally relate there are a lot of days I would rather sleep in than get up early.

[colonel_bastard]

Yay! I think so, too. ;D

And yeah, Mount Blanket is totally autobiographical, haha. NOT a morning person over here!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[joanhello]

You do the characters so well! And you've got some choice lines in there:

"tries to figure out a way to say “you are an idiot” without using those actual words." Now, there's a superpower worth having.

“That and to suffocate my prey.” LOL!

[colonel_bastard]

Thanks very much!

If Wayne figures that one out, he will become truly unstoppable. XD

Glad you enjoyed it!

[tripperfunster]

Daawwww!

I gotta say, Wayne is a LOT more patient than I ever would be. It would wear on me pretty quick. :D

I really do dig these two as a couple. <3 (well, not as much as some other couples, but you sell them well!)

[colonel_bastard]

Well, his last long-term relationship was with a highstrung drama queen. He's got a lot of practice at being patient. ;D

I'm so happy to hear it! I still think fondly of MM/MM, but I've got all sorts of crazy drama in my life right now and I've been wanting to write a pairing that's a little more relaxed, haha.

Always great to hear from you, Tripp! Glad you enjoyed this one! <3

[anneka_neko]

Dude, have you secretly been waking me up in the morning? By which I mean afternoon? That's kind of exactly how it goes down. xD

Ohhh, Hal. That redheaded freckly blanket-covered pile of manchild issues and totally not-there feelings. <3 I still love him being all not even remotely perfect. :D

ALSO BACON. DEAR GOD BACON. BACON BACON BACON. I HAVEN'T HAD A REAL KITCHEN IN TWO WEEKS DUE TO REMODELING, AND YOU DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND HOW GOOD BACON WOULD BE RIGHT NOW, COLONEL. BACON FOR DINNER IS THE BEST EVER.

[colonel_bastard]

LOL, no, I've just waking myself up in the morning. I'd punch my alarm clock in the nose if I could. XD

Yeah, he's a real piece of work. ^_^ God bless Wayne for putting up with all of his shenanigans!

SOLUTION: ORDER BACON TO BE DELIVERED??

[anneka_neko]

HOLY FUCK, CAN YOU DO THAT? IS BACON TO GO EVEN A THING? FUCK IS THIS FUCKERY?