Comments | collidingwithme: Chapter 9

collidingwithme

Chapter 9

May 02, 2009 17:41

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grythen, kismette, jaelon, chapter 9, outskirts, evelynn, zaelem

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iluvaus June 3 2009, 20:39:57 UTC

Dude.

Evil, EVIL cliffhanger!

olivethegreat July 14 2009, 23:26:06 UTC

I don't want Zaelem to die! He is much too good looking to die! =(

collidingwithme July 15 2009, 02:06:12 UTC

lol! That isn't even logical! Looks count for nothing in the face of death. X)

petalbrook August 14 2009, 18:59:48 UTC

I can't believe that this is your first story! You're such a master of the cliffhanger already.

collidingwithme August 16 2009, 14:38:54 UTC

I'm not! It's just that the chapter wants to end there. I can't help it. X) It would have been weird to not end there. But it still makes me extremely happy to hear you say that. 8) Well, I love to read other people's stories too, so I guess I've actually learnt a lot from them. :)

maonao January 3 2010, 21:33:36 UTC

Ack! They are in hot water now. And after that nice reunion with Evelynn, too. :(

Glad I don't actually have to wait for the next part, LOL

blueberry_sims June 22 2010, 07:29:29 UTC

wow it' getting really exciting

collidingwithme June 22 2010, 15:55:10 UTC

Yay! That's what I hoped. :D