That fight scene was incredible! I'm so impressed. Fight scenes are so difficult! I avoid them like the plague. But you totally nailed that one. Really interested to see where this goes. :D
I'm so happy to hear that! I was pretty worried that the whole fighting thing would seem impractical and give readers a like-that's-gonna-happen kind of feeling as I don't really know what to look out for. I can't wait to get to the next part too, heh. :P
Thank you! :D Evelynn isn't nonchalant, Kismette was like a sister to her! She only wanted the best for Kismette and she did felt that going back was the best for her, based on her own experience. :) Well, not many live with a bullet in their chest, do they? :P
Awesome, Ning! I finally got all caught up, and now I'm hanging on that cliff with everyone else! I hope Kismet is ready to use her hidden talent! Poor Zaelem! Fix him up, Kizz!
I have to say, your buildings and scenery are outstanding! You stage your scenes wonderfully! I wish I had half your talent - it must take you forever to make everything look so good!
lol, I spent like a whole morning building the set for the market and it's only used for one miserable chapter! :( I'm not talented, serious! I'm always so envious of other people's pictures!
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That last shot...oh boy!! Should be interesting!
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All it took was a split second and it changed everything.. :)
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That fight scene was incredible! I'm so impressed. Fight scenes are so difficult! I avoid them like the plague. But you totally nailed that one. Really interested to see where this goes. :D
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I'm so happy to hear that! I was pretty worried that the whole fighting thing would seem impractical and give readers a like-that's-gonna-happen kind of feeling as I don't really know what to look out for. I can't wait to get to the next part too, heh. :P
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I wish Evelynn wasn't...so nonchalant about leaving Kismette. And I'm so nervous about Zaelem! I hope he's okay!
Can't wait for the next update!
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Me too! ^^
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*Awesome writing is awesome, btw*
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Oh no! I'm always fussing over every other line. Can't seem to bring out what I wanted to. :( But thank you just the same! :)
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I have to say, your buildings and scenery are outstanding! You stage your scenes wonderfully! I wish I had half your talent - it must take you forever to make everything look so good!
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lol, I spent like a whole morning building the set for the market and it's only used for one miserable chapter! :( I'm not talented, serious! I'm always so envious of other people's pictures!
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