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WHITE COLLAR KINK MEME ROUND 4

May 20, 2011 12:04

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Neal suffering a panic attack - spoiler for 3.10 anonymous August 10 2011, 17:31:53 UTC

In mid-season finale, during the raid on Richmond's appartment, Peter locks Neal in this tiny room and then tells the reception clerks that Neal doesn't have any medical condition, so under no circumstances they are to let him out ( ... )

Re: Neal suffering a panic attack - spoiler for 3.10 anonymous August 10 2011, 17:38:42 UTC

somene please write this

Re: Neal suffering a panic attack - spoiler for 3.10 anonymous August 11 2011, 01:30:56 UTC

Yes, this PLEASE SOMEONE WRITE THIS ONE!

FILL: Breathing Space (part 1) anonymous August 15 2011, 06:31:17 UTC

Neal thinks he can brave it. He's been locked in small rooms before. He's always made it out, more or less unscathed. But, damn, this one is stuffy, and much too bright ( ... )

FILL: Breathing Space (part 2) anonymous August 15 2011, 06:32:14 UTC

His fingers tingle and threaten to go numb, and something inside him twists and turns. It's a small miracle that his heart is even still pumping blood through this veins, that his lungs can supply it with oxygen. Maybe it's pure survival instinct, but this breathing evens out-just a little. Enough to feel the nausea full force.

A hand clutches his stomach. Don't puke, don't puke, don't puke, his mind reels. Because he knows that will only make it worse. "Help," he tries again, but it comes out barely as a whimper. "I can't, I just-" he gasps ( ... )

FILL: Breathing Space (part 3) anonymous August 15 2011, 06:32:55 UTC

Twenty minutes later, Peter saunters over to where Neal is sitting in the back of the ambulance, fumbling the band aid that covers the puncture mark in the crook of his arm where they injected the Ativan ( ... )

Re: FILL: Breathing Space (part 3) anonymous August 15 2011, 10:05:50 UTC

This was great. I like your description of his panic attack - I felt like I was experiencing it with him. Very well done.

Re: FILL: Breathing Space (part 3) anonymous August 15 2011, 10:37:08 UTC

OP here :D !!! It's a beautiful morning and there is so much love for this fic in me :P I totally agree with my fellow anon, the panic attack description is perfect, you can feel your very own panic attack just creeping up your spine. But the best part is Peter's initial reaction, he finds Neal in distress and he still doesn't believe him *sigh* Well-deserved guilt trip for Peter :D

Brava! *hugs*

Re: FILL: Breathing Space (part 3) anonymous August 15 2011, 10:57:31 UTC

This is excellent! Thanks!

Re: FILL: Breathing Space (part 3) shadowfireflame August 17 2011, 14:29:16 UTC

This was a really great fill! I loved the ending especially, the fact that there's always a "but..."

Re: FILL: Breathing Space (part 3) anonymous August 27 2011, 09:02:19 UTC

Of course, now Neal didn't get the painting switched out, so he might well be heading back to a small room in prison!

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