15; infinite; time stops for you, too

Apr 03, 2013 01:39

time stops for you, too | r for mature themes (spoiler: inexplicit sex, suicide)
woohyun/sunggyu
2.6k words
oneshot
it gets happier at the end. unless you read the chronological version. i suggest reading this one first. c:

Woohyun rewinds, and Sunggyu comes to life in his eyes. He presses play and almost tastes him again; sweet, with a bit of ( Read more... )

time stops for you too, infinite

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deplore April 4 2013, 23:11:17 UTC
oh wow *u* from the first paragraph, on the repetition of "they match," i was hooked. i've seen the mv this is based off of before (and really liked it) so without reading the spoiler i kind of knew where this was going about 2/3 of the way through, but in a good way, if that makes sense? it was a beautiful homage to the mv -- i even loved that the title came after the first paragraph, the same way the title shows up at the mv. and despite the unchronological progression, i really love how you managed to keep everything in an understandable timeline -- when i checked the chronologically-ordered version, pretty much everything aligned the way that i had pieced it together in my head.

thank you so much for writing and sharing!

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portaldice April 5 2013, 14:00:15 UTC
golly your infinite fics are really really tasty, just saying /);;(\

thank you! i'm glad you think i was able to do the mv justice, it's a really lovely video. the title's placement after a few paragraphs is something i really do with several of my fics, but i didn't even notice that until your comment, haha. ouo and it's always nice to know that this fic actually made sense haha; until the very last moment, i was debating with myself whether or not to make it anachronic in the first place. i'm glad that it seems to have turned out kind of okay otl.

thank you for reading and commenting! <3

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xdenisex April 6 2013, 00:36:41 UTC
(Of course, no one wants to admit that if they’d never tied him down into a genre he never wanted in the first place, maybe this wouldn’t have happened.)

UGH

LOVELY AND WONDERFUL and i'm in pain

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portaldice April 7 2013, 07:17:19 UTC
haha, thank you very much ;w;

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sajiu93 April 8 2013, 21:23:21 UTC
WHAT. WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME NOW MY HOUSEMATES ARE FREAKING OUT CAUSE I CAN'T STOP BAWLING ;AAA

I'm totally deprived of WooGyu these days cause there haven't been any interaction on stage, but this. THIS. It has all the right amount of angst that makes my stomach churn (in a good way, of course!)
Your fic totally earned a spot in my bookmarks folder. Will visit frequently to re-red this beautifully written piece of art ♥

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portaldice April 12 2013, 13:46:52 UTC
;uuu;

kind of woogyu deprived myself, so i often watch older videos to stave the pangs lol otl. thank you very much for your kind words! ;w;

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heijihatsutori April 18 2013, 16:06:30 UTC
I'm just into the 3rd paragraph when everything seems familiar and OMG IT'S NELL AND IT'S WOOGYU NOOOOOO I CAN SEE WHERE THIS GOES ALREADY or I'm just that big of a Nell fan to recognize the setting right off the bat BUT BUT IT'S ANGST AND NELL OMG NELLLLLLLL

/goes to put the song into playlist because FEELS.

/continue reading with tissue ready D:

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heijihatsutori April 18 2013, 16:07:39 UTC
And just realize the title's a line from the song. Damn, should've caught that one OTL

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heijihatsutori April 18 2013, 16:20:30 UTC
Congratulations you just killed me. Now to go and read the other version.

and sorry this is a legit spamming OMG OTL

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portaldice May 6 2013, 08:08:32 UTC
haha, it's not spamming at all! c: i'm glad you read and commented. thank you very much~

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pollutedlungs May 6 2013, 03:19:09 UTC
this is horribly late, and i apologize, but i was just so scared to read this (and for good reason!!!).
to be fair, this is my very first infinite angst fic, and maybe it's simply because i love for these boys to be shrouded in marshmallow fluff and sunshine, but this really broke me. i love woogyu to death as well, and i knew tragedy wasn't going to sit well with me, but i just had to give this piece a chance and i'm really honestly glad that i did.
this was absolutely stunning. i loved how it was somewhat vague, poetic even, everything was just a little bit cloudy and fic like that infuriates me but i love it so much.
you did a wonderful job writing this and i really enjoyed reading it! i'm going to go cry now ok bYE

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portaldice May 6 2013, 08:15:01 UTC
oh no, there's no tardiness to apologize for when it comes to fic! c:
i'm glad you gave this fic a chance; i mean, it's definitely easier to read about people being happy than, well, this lol. and i'm happy you enjoyed it! thank you very much for reading and commenting ^^

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