15; infinite; time stops for you, too

[portaldice]

time stops for you, too | r for mature themes (spoiler: inexplicit sex, suicide)
woohyun/sunggyu
2.6k words
oneshot
it gets happier at the end. unless you read the chronological version. i suggest reading this one first. c:

Woohyun rewinds, and Sunggyu comes to life in his eyes. He presses play and almost tastes him again; sweet, with a bit of

Comments

[cha_cy_17]

This is magnificent. A Nell inspired WooGyu fic. ♥
Both versions are just...wow. *A*
Oh my god stop the tears D;

[portaldice]

Thank you very much! <3
I... only have tissue... ;w; /gives

[dapdaphaex]

took me a minute or two to figure out exactly what was happening, but oh my gosh its so deep i think im going to cry ;n;
Its beautiful, gorgeous, and all the other synonyms for that.

When u were talking about the sweetener i totally knew it wasn't sweetener. Maybe its cause of my lack of knowledge, but i've never actually seen a red liquid sweetener /shot. plus red is like, a dangerous colour. But you made it sound so pretty, i probably would've wanted to try it too. But, my sunggyu ;n; oh woohyun

[portaldice]

oh, thank you! c:

and haha, funny you mention that! the entire time i was writing, i was convincing myself like, "there must be a red liquid sweetener out there somewhere, right...?" but then i eventually gave in and thought of it as strawberry syrup haha otl. but yep, i chose red for all the symbolism attached to it; it's related to love but then it's also a bright warning color, like on stop signs. c: our infinite babies

[galmaegi]

ohh this was really interesting! i love that mv and i like the way you've gotten more in-depth into what goes on in it here. reading the chronological version afterward was neat, too - it works well both ways, but with subtle differences. (and props to you for finding a way to arrange them out of chronological order but still keeping tension - i find that so difficult ;;)

[portaldice]

gasps i'm exploding over here, i really like your fics!

i'm glad you liked it - i'm not much used to writing things anachronically either, so your comment is a relief. c: i wasn't sure whether to make a chronological version either, so i'm happy that it seems to have turned out rather okay ;u;

thank you for reading and commenting! c:

[ashelendil]

This just amazing! I keep re-reading it and it keeps making me cry =_=
Thank you <3

[portaldice]

ohh, thank you very much ;w;

[wristvein]

NO

[wristvein]

how could you do this to me "it gets happier at the end" YEAH MY ASS

i am in awe at the way you were able to make 2 versions of it and still have it make sense that is amazing ok and both are just as good as the other.... .... or...did that even make sense idk what is grammar at 4am. shit. i really wanted to leave a nice comment and everything but i'm crying and falling asleep on my keyboard at the same time, i'm sorry, just know that i really enjoyed your sad writing it was so lovely and clear
ugh @ you
thank you for sharing T____T

[portaldice]

well if you isolate the original version's ending scene, it's definitely happy... ;w;

and thank you very much! your comment's very much nice as it is, and it's the thought that counts~ i'm glad you enjoyed it even at 4 in the morning, haha. c: (and get some sleep lol)