Comments | cjmarlowe: FIC: Paved With Hearts (CWRPS AU, Jared/Jensen, PG-13, 5/5)

cjmarlowe

FIC: Paved With Hearts (CWRPS AU, Jared/Jensen, PG-13, 5/5)

Apr 24, 2009 15:10

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( The last email Jared sent Jeff, he told him that his exams were finishing on a Thursday and that the graduation ceremony was the following Friday )

fic, j2, fic: paved with hearts, jared/jensen, cwrps fic

Comments 283

macbyrne April 25 2009, 00:21:01 UTC

This was lovely; I wanted to cuddle Jared so badly!! And Jeff was wonderful, and JENSEN!! OH! Just gorgeous, and your descriptions of the mountains and Jared's longing for home almost made me cry. Bravo!

cjmarlowe April 25 2009, 04:38:55 UTC

Thank you! They did go through the wringer a little, all of them, but at least they got their happy ending. :D

katrinaswift April 25 2009, 00:56:39 UTC

jfc, I miss BC now!

This was amazing, I absolutely loved it!

cjmarlowe April 25 2009, 04:40:21 UTC

Oh man, I miss it too. It's possible there are a few parts of this that are based on my grandmother's house. :D

Thank you very much!

tabaqui April 25 2009, 00:57:27 UTC

Ooooooh, lovely!
'Heidi' was always a favorite of mine as a child, and you've reworked it masterfully!

Really just wonderful. I love the lake and the mountains and Jeff and Jared finally feeling like he had a *home*...beautiful stuff!

Really enjoyed it.

cjmarlowe April 25 2009, 04:41:48 UTC

Thank you so much! Heidi was alwaya a favourite of mine, too. :D

evildiorama April 25 2009, 01:53:00 UTC

CJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was fantastic. Wow, seriously. I know you're good, but you're like...really damn good.

cjmarlowe April 25 2009, 04:43:55 UTC

Thank you, hon! :DDDD Man, I've been writing this story so long, it feels weird to be done. :)

evildiorama April 25 2009, 05:30:52 UTC

And please know that it got me all teary eyed AT WORK.

If I get fired, I'm blaming you and your earnest, home needing Jared.

Damn you.

madame_d April 25 2009, 02:11:20 UTC

This is absolutely fantastic. I had a deprived childhood (er... out of the country) so I don't know the movie, but the story took my breath away. It made me happy and sniffly and squeey (sort of in order), and all the characters are absolutely fabulous, from Chad and Jeff and the puppies (!!!) to Jensen's parents.

Why did the story have to end? *sadface*

cjmarlowe April 25 2009, 04:45:38 UTC

I have to confess, I didn't actually watch the movie until after I'd claimed the prompt. >.> I claimed it solely based on my love of the book growing up, and my conviction that Jared would make the perfect Heidi. :D

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Even if it did eventually have to end. XD

madame_d April 25 2009, 12:30:58 UTC

I claimed it solely based on my love of the book growing up

Not familiar with the book, either. I admit that knowing the original makes the reader appreciate the 'remake' all the more, as one can see the changes and adaptations and very specific things the writer has done to the original to fit it with the J2 pairing. So, sadly, I cannot appreciate any of that, but I still loved the story tremendously. ♥