bloodleaf; layxing

[chuyeol]

title: bloodleaf
rating: r
pairing: yixing/lay
warning: this is basically a tragic attempt at horror so -- character death, blood, gore, body horror, etc.
word count: 5775w
a/n: I had to scrap my original plan three days before deadline because I realized I couldn't finish it in time, so this is probably... below standard. Profuse apologies.

Comments

[zyxisagod]

this is scarily awesome holy crap I couldn't tear my eyes away. very Frankenstein except scarier bc lay is just. whoa.

I love how lay's the opposite of yixing in that he wants to hurt and kill. also the ingredients were so great and I LOVE the part where lay went "I'm not going to be a birdcage"

if you ever expand on this I would be SO EXCITED

[chuyeol]

omg I -- TT _ TT I was editing this a little when you commented!! i hope you didn't catch any discrepancies or typos aha \(////o////)

honestly i was in a frantic hurry when i scrapped my original plan which was taking way too long to finish, so my brain just said 'frankenstein' and i was like 'that's awful, brain, but okay !!!! '

omg scarier than frankenstein, you're too kind TT _ TT i will cherish this comment forever.

THANKS i did last minute googling for the ingredients actually, so each flower was paired with the organ it was best for healing hueheue

TT_ TT and I L0VE Y0U THIS MEANS S0 MUCH T0 ME !! i've been dying to use ~ribs as birdcages~ for three thousand years tbh and i got to finally use it!!! heh i'm probably going to reuse it in other things too bc im a sucker

cries i'd be really excited too!!!! but i... don't know how to expand /) n (\ but maybe later i might do a similar thing for someone else, or just redo this and make it better. I'M S0 H0N0RED AND T0UCHED THAT Y0U READ AND C0MMENTED, H0NESTLY ;___; <33333333

[zyxisagod]

IM SCREAMING I WAS JUST LOOKING THROUGH YOUR JOURNAL AND YOU WROTE THE SUCHEN BUZZ FEELS OMG IVE REREAD IT SO MANY TIMES ON CRITCAP I CAN QUOTE SOME OF IT VERBATIM AND I DIDNT KNOW YOU CHANGED YOUR LJ SO I THOUGHT THE AUTHOR LEFT FICDOM/FANDOM AAAAAHHHH OH MAN OH MAN

ok but yes THIS PARTICULAR FIC

i was reading it on my ipod and im bad at writing long comments on it so it was kinda just rushed so im HAPPY you loved themmmmmmmmmmmm

[chuyeol]

OMG NO WAY I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE THERE ARE PPL WHO LIKE BUZZ FEELINGS im so honored omg im gonna pass out im saving this comment forever too TT _ TT BUT HEY HELLO yes i am here still in fandom, hopefully sticking around for a long time yet !!!

omg no you were great u made my dayyyyyy ty so much againnnn ;~~; HEART EYES EMOJI (dat jongdae gif. i'm in smithereens)

it's been ages since i read it too i barely remember anything except the general plot and the first chapter T _ T

HAHA OH YOU!! i guess i got lucky then ;D

tbh i felt like i had to include some chinese ppl considering the fic is based in china!! so yeah ;w; (i have a soft spot for hoya <33) I GET U WITH LIYIN

[bluedreaming]

Wow this is just - this is beautiful and the flowers and the menace and the twisted darkness and the way you count the days and put in the weather and just tiny pieces of dark that make a whole

Life for the wrong reason rots

This was like the smell of the cemetery, roses and the sweeter smell of rot underneath

[chuyeol]

omggg CATBEAR............. NGL I KIND 0F WRITE THIS WITH Y0U IN MIND

i was thinking to myself what would catbear write in this situation!!!! from time to time and im just so ////u//// s-senpai noticed !!! ////u////

i was a little worried that constantly counting the days would be redundant and annoying so im glad you liked it ;;;;;

THANK Y0U S0 MUCH for reading and commenting so nicely /u\ <33

[wileret]

This is SO creepy and I LOVE IT. And wow, the way Yixing makes Lay !! Love that he uses branches and flowers and all, and the bird is so meaningful wow!!

But holy... god... the ending :_____