bloodleaf; layxing

Aug 06, 2015 17:40

title: bloodleaf
rating: r
pairing: yixing/lay
warning: this is basically a tragic attempt at horror so -- character death, blood, gore, body horror, etc.
word count: 5775w
a/n: I had to scrap my original plan three days before deadline because I realized I couldn't finish it in time, so this is probably... below standard. Profuse apologies. ( Read more... )

pairing: yixing/lay, group: exo

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zyxisagod August 7 2015, 17:59:31 UTC
this is scarily awesome holy crap I couldn't tear my eyes away. very Frankenstein except scarier bc lay is just. whoa.

I love how lay's the opposite of yixing in that he wants to hurt and kill. also the ingredients were so great and I LOVE the part where lay went "I'm not going to be a birdcage"

if you ever expand on this I would be SO EXCITED

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chuyeol August 7 2015, 19:28:51 UTC
omg I -- TT _ TT I was editing this a little when you commented!! i hope you didn't catch any discrepancies or typos aha \(////o////)

honestly i was in a frantic hurry when i scrapped my original plan which was taking way too long to finish, so my brain just said 'frankenstein' and i was like 'that's awful, brain, but okay !!!! '

omg scarier than frankenstein, you're too kind TT _ TT i will cherish this comment forever.

THANKS i did last minute googling for the ingredients actually, so each flower was paired with the organ it was best for healing hueheue

TT_ TT and I L0VE Y0U THIS MEANS S0 MUCH T0 ME !! i've been dying to use ~ribs as birdcages~ for three thousand years tbh and i got to finally use it!!! heh i'm probably going to reuse it in other things too bc im a sucker

cries i'd be really excited too!!!! but i... don't know how to expand /) n (\ but maybe later i might do a similar thing for someone else, or just redo this and make it better. I'M S0 H0N0RED AND T0UCHED THAT Y0U READ AND C0MMENTED, H0NESTLY ;___; <33333333 ( ... )

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zyxisagod August 8 2015, 10:37:14 UTC
IM SCREAMING I WAS JUST LOOKING THROUGH YOUR JOURNAL AND YOU WROTE THE SUCHEN BUZZ FEELS OMG IVE REREAD IT SO MANY TIMES ON CRITCAP I CAN QUOTE SOME OF IT VERBATIM AND I DIDNT KNOW YOU CHANGED YOUR LJ SO I THOUGHT THE AUTHOR LEFT FICDOM/FANDOM AAAAAHHHH OH MAN OH MAN

ok but yes THIS PARTICULAR FIC

i was reading it on my ipod and im bad at writing long comments on it so it was kinda just rushed so im HAPPY you loved themmmmmmmmmmmm


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chuyeol August 9 2015, 09:03:44 UTC
OMG NO WAY I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE THERE ARE PPL WHO LIKE BUZZ FEELINGS im so honored omg im gonna pass out im saving this comment forever too TT _ TT BUT HEY HELLO yes i am here still in fandom, hopefully sticking around for a long time yet !!!

omg no you were great u made my dayyyyyy ty so much againnnn ;~~; HEART EYES EMOJI (dat jongdae gif. i'm in smithereens)

it's been ages since i read it too i barely remember anything except the general plot and the first chapter T _ T

HAHA OH YOU!! i guess i got lucky then ;D

tbh i felt like i had to include some chinese ppl considering the fic is based in china!! so yeah ;w; (i have a soft spot for hoya <33) I GET U WITH LIYIN ( ... )

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zyxisagod August 25 2015, 21:17:17 UTC
omg buzz feelings pretty much killed me it made me go 'how the flying fuck did i fucking miss this???' and i just had to commit it to memory to compensate ( ... )

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chuyeol August 30 2015, 14:17:44 UTC
omg you mentioned peter pan and i was like what the fuck why did i put in peter pan and then i re-read the entire thing and THERE ARE S0 MANY TYP0S I NEVER N0TICED I HAVE T0 FIX THEM

omg i'm TT__________TT u r inspiring me to go back to writing properly again i had no idea ppl would like it to the extent of quoting it omg )-(o

WAAAAH HIGH FIVE 0KAY NEUR0TIC J00NMYUN APPRECIAT0RS FTW. omg idk about the rosie project but i'll check it out!!! ah i didn't intend for him to have asperger's, i think that's v serious and using that for comical purposes when i dont have asperger's/enough info myself, that would be bad ;;;;;; but if anyone wants to interpret it that way then they are free to !!

it's been more than a year omg (what's your name btw i'm yam!) u have to watchhhh, livejournal user zyxisagod :((( IT'S S0 C00LLLLL

SQUEALS THIS IS TEMPTING... I VERY MUCH WANT T0 SEND S0ME0NE T0 HEAVEN HMMMMMMM... I SHALL DEFINITELY TRY

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zyxisagod September 6 2015, 13:27:07 UTC
HUHU HELLO YAM~ you can call me red ^ w ( ... )

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