OneShot: Lies Part 3

May 31, 2009 21:11



Lies

“Emotional stress?”, repeated Kame, disbelieving.

The doctor nodded. “It can be caused by a lot of things. First of all, there’s the stress from working too much. And second, there is fear. He could have had fear of other’s opinions, of the reaction of the audience, of himself failing or even of someone in his surroundings. When you ( Read more... )

lies, nishikido ryo, ueda tatsuya, one shot, fluff, angst, ryoda

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jindaluver June 3 2009, 20:06:18 UTC
saving my spot XD

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jindaluver June 3 2009, 20:26:10 UTC
yay first!! XD
i love the ending.
i was shocked at first because tat-chan lost his memory.
but thank God it's only temporary.

i almost cry reading ryo's letter.
and i love that you actually put the lyrics in this fic.
and you made me happy that everything is okay again (^______^)

thanks for sharing~
*hugs*

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cherrylady6 June 7 2009, 13:45:46 UTC
I'm glad you liked the ending :DD
I wonder what Ryo would've done if Ueda had really lost his memory for longer xD

I tried to make the letter emotional, so I'm happy :) that you nearly cried? *bricked* xD
I don't know why I suddenly remembered the lyrics but I thought it fits, thanks :DD
I fail at writing sad endings!! xDD

Thank you for following this, for reading & commenting! ♥♥ -hugs back-

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lil_brooke June 3 2009, 20:27:27 UTC
uhmm ano..can i say this???
I LOVE U~!!! LOL!
THANK U SOO MUCH 4 THE UPDATE..LOL!
*gives ryoda cookies*
and aww the end already.. *hopes 4 a sequel*
LOL! but ryo's letter really touched me ne..
thanks again 4 this nice fic.. :)

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cherrylady6 June 7 2009, 13:48:01 UTC
Haha yeah it's fine xDD I feel really honoured now! :D
I know I could've written more but .. it was actually supposed to be a One Shot xDD
A sequel? I-I don't know what to write for it xD I guess it'd be very fluffy? xD
Aw, I'm glad, I tried to make the letter emotional :)
Thanks for reading & commenting, a lot ^__^I love you too ♥♥

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raixas June 3 2009, 21:29:04 UTC
*sobs*
really nice ending!
now i won't kill anyone~ XD

thank you author-chan!
*sent candies via doves*

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cherrylady6 June 7 2009, 13:49:35 UTC
-gives tissues-
Thank you, glad you like it :D
Haha that's good xDD They better survive ne xD And the reporter are already dead anyway ne xD

Aw you're so sweet ^__^
Thank you a lot for reading & commenting AND the candies ;DD ♥

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floppy_snoopi June 3 2009, 21:35:38 UTC
the end already? oh (u_u)

it was lovelyyyyy!! i love how ryo convinced the nurse to be with tatchan all night XD how can she tell him "no" indeed XD
and then tatchan's reaction when he saw ryo's sleeping face on his legs *shining eyes* and when he read the letter it was so beautiful !! (*_*)

i'm happy it's a happy ending, that they're back together happy like ever XD and i'm sure they'll be enjoying annoying everyone by being all lovey-dovey all the time for now XD

thank you for sharing this lovely fic ne ~

will be looking for new ryoda story from you ^_^

*threw tones of ryoda's favorite cookies*

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cherrylady6 June 7 2009, 13:53:39 UTC
Aw yes, it was actually supposed to be an One Shot xD

Haha who can resist Ryo ne xDD I enjoyed writing the scenes in the hospital somehow :) Glad you liked it :D And I tried to make the letter emotional :)

I really fail at writing sad endings! xD I bet they'll annoy everyone :> Especially Ryo is evil ne xD Though Ueda is S, too. What a combination, poor members! xD

I have several ideas, I just need more time xDD *waiting for holidays*
Thank you for reading & commenting, a lot :DD

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mklia June 3 2009, 22:51:27 UTC
awesome.
Since i know that u're a RyoTego fan(Haizul talk too much abt u..)

-arigatou-

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cherrylady6 June 7 2009, 13:56:02 UTC
Eh, she talks about me? xD I'm surprised ^^

Yes, I am or was actually a RyoTego fan :) I kinda stopped with that pairing at the moment. So, do you prefer RyoTego or RyoDa? :D

Thank you for reading & commenting, I'm glad you liked it! :)

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