OneShot: Lies Part 3

[cherrylady6]

Lies

“Emotional stress?”, repeated Kame, disbelieving.

The doctor nodded. “It can be caused by a lot of things. First of all, there’s the stress from working too much. And second, there is fear. He could have had fear of other’s opinions, of the reaction of the audience, of himself failing or even of someone in his surroundings. When you

Comments

[pwoth]

I LOVE THE ENDING! *w*
*glomps* thank you for writing this!
I look forward to your future work~~~!

[cherrylady6]

I'm glad you liked it :DD
The end is always hard to write <.<
I have ideas but no time xDD *waits for holidays*

Thank you for reading & commenting! :DD *hugs you*

[alaruber]

*the sky suddenly turned sugary*
omg~~~!!
this is mad sweet!!!!
aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
this is awesome~!!!

thanks for this awesome fic :))
gambaru for ur studies :))

[cherrylady6]

Haha yeah, suddenly it was fluff again ne xDD I fail at fluff 8D
But endings are always so hard to write ^^

Thank you for reading & commenting ♥ I will give my best for studying ;D though I'm lazy. xD

[chika1611]

It's really good. Good job. By the way, I added you as my friend. Hope you don't mind. I just want to be your friend and know you better. *bows*

[cherrylady6]

I'm glad you liked it :)
I added you back. Let's get to know each other :D I so envy you for being able to speak Japanese ^__^

Thank you for reading & commenting ne :) *bows too*

[chika1611]

Eh? But I'm still learning it too, I'm nervous too much when I'm talking with my Japanese lecturer.

[cherrylady6]

Sorry for my late reply 8D The first thing you get to know of me is that I fail at comments xD -sighs-
Aw, but you're learning it :) I don't have a chance to study with a teacher or sth here :( You're lucky :D ~

[sono_kiseki]

YOU. *points finger dramatically* LIKE ASKDJHSAJKSAH. I DIDN'T KNOW YOU'D LIKE, WRITE A FANFIC AND IT'S ALL MY FAULT FOR NOT STALKING, RIGHT? IMMA GOING TO FRIEND YOU SO I CAN STALK YOU THROUGH EMAIL AND YOU CAN'T DO ANYTHING ABOUT THAT. HA. *shot badly*

Anyways, this fic is really sweet, though the part where Uebo's in the hospital and all made me go O: and sad. DD: I spotted some tenses and grammar mistakes, but nothing so major. XD For a non-native speaker, you're doing very well! I think you wrote that English isn't your native language... right? Sweet story, thanks for sharing! :DD

♥

[cherrylady6]

Kyaaah xDD -hides-
I didn't know I would either 8DD -bricked-
And of course!! Do you see someone else to blame? xD It's your fault ~~ ;D -runs-
ahshjdhfj you're so evil 8D But hey, I'm sadistic, too xD BUT HA STALK ME ♥ I WILL STALK YOU TOO. I'LL BE BETTER :D

Aw, thanks xDD I guess I made it too sweet, I'm actually an angst-loving person :D
Right :) I'm actually German xD I'm glad it's not major but it's still .. ugh :/
Thanks for reading & commenting stalker friend! :DD

♥♥

[sono_kiseki]

Angst-loving people of the world unite 8DD I love to write angst, but I don't often enough. D:
Hey hey, for a non-native speaker you're doing very well! I have read stories/compos and stuff by native speakers and they make me just scream and run away. XD and oh cool, German! :DD

YES I'M YOUR STALKA 8DD

[cherrylady6]

Haha yess ♥ We should like form a group or something :D -bricked-
Me too actually. But I can't find the time to or when I do, then I have to write fluff first to make it understandable like in this story 8D. I should read it more often, too! xD
Aw, thank you ♥ Makes me happy ~ I know what you're speaking of! xDD Sometimes I could go crazy about the grammar mistakes I see in essays of my classmates or somewhere in the internet .. xD
German is not that cool, really. xD

You have to stalk someone who is a major fail at answering comments then xD -sigh- ♥

[yaotomesugoi]

awww, this was nice! Thanks for sharing :)