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Delicious Irony (And Other Acquired Tastes): Chapter Six

Nov 06, 2006 13:34

Chapter seven is finally complete! There's just one little scene that I flat out hate, and I am playing around with it even as I type this (well, not as I type this because, you know, I can't type in two places at once, but you get what I'm saying) so hopefully I will be pleased with it soon and can then move on to chapter eight!

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r, remus/sirius, delicious irony, chaptered fic

Comments 26

bleeding_slowly November 6 2006, 19:05:37 UTC

"People aren’t going to learn respect by having to see you stick your tongue down my throat." I dunno about that ... I'd be willing to learn oh so many things if that was what I got to watch while learning hehe :)

yourssincerely November 6 2006, 20:59:03 UTC

ROFL. So true. I could learn much respect watching a display of puppy love.

bryseis November 6 2006, 19:08:50 UTC

ooo... what is little Petey plotting?

Hurryup, post more! *grin*

yourssincerely November 6 2006, 21:02:00 UTC

Peter is plotting...something. Heh heh. I guess you'll just have to keep reading to figure out what it is ;)

Posting as quickly as I can! School must (most unfortunately) come first.

may_g November 6 2006, 19:11:09 UTC

loved this chapter
Sirius fighting with that bloke was great!

yourssincerely November 6 2006, 21:03:25 UTC

I really wanted to make Sirius punch someone. Heh heh heh. I am so evil to my characters sometimes. Thanks for reviewing!

may_g November 7 2006, 08:30:21 UTC

you're not evil, the bloke is bastard, he deserved it :P
and Sirius is so great, I can't wait to read chapter seven, when were you thinking of posting it?

kawaii_tenshi27 November 6 2006, 21:39:55 UTC

Ooo... so that means... CHAPTER SEVEN is next, si? ::giggles happily like a schoolgirl:: There should be lots of snoggage. Of the Remus/Sirius or Sirius/Remus (more likely, granted) variety. Sirius punching wankers is quite lovely. OOoo. He should punch someone else in defense of dear Moony's honour. Not that dear Moony would appreciate it, of course, because he can defend his own honour, but Sirius would be quite ::makes 'mmmmm' sounds:: doing it. ;)

yourssincerely November 8 2006, 03:15:48 UTC

Chapter seven is indeed next! If I can ever make that ONE STUPID SCENE acceptable. It's driving me crazy. But I shall persevere!

Having Sirius hit people is very therapeutic, both for him and for me =P

Thanks for reviewing!

daughtersofisis November 7 2006, 00:47:47 UTC

Oh, there's so much here that I love! Lily as Yoko Ono... Peter having *gasp* a personality... and the whole premise is godly and brilliant and w00t. I have to say that my favorite aspect of this story so far is Sirius, because I honestly don't know what I think of him. I'm not sure whether to think he's brilliant and sweet for attempting to rid Hogwarts of prejudice in one fell swoop or a stupid, insensitive bastard for not getting how completely different it is for Remus. I love having characters that I'm not sure of, I love it! Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

yourssincerely November 8 2006, 03:19:30 UTC

I'm not sure whether to think he's brilliant and sweet for attempting to rid Hogwarts of prejudice in one fell swoop or a stupid, insensitive bastard for not getting how completely different it is for Remus.

That's really the thing about Sirius, or how I've always thought of him. His actions/reasons for his actions are so ambiguous - it really depends on which character's point of view you're looking at. I've always loved Sirius because of that, too - he may mean well, but sometimes, it just isn't well, but the fact that he's trying makes all the crap he's doing seem irrelevent. I'm glad you like Sirius! He's always been a favorite of mine :)

Thank you so much for your review!

daughtersofisis November 9 2006, 00:58:49 UTC

The thing is, though, that Rowling doesn't really get at what you're talking about very well. It seems like she's attempting to, what with Sirius's recklessness and Snape's memory in the fifth book, but a lot of times I see fanfic that gets at that much more accurately. You portray him really perfectly, darling.

yourssincerely November 9 2006, 02:29:28 UTC

JKR doesn't really get into any of the Marauders pre-Azkaban, so I kind of made up my own personalities for them. For Remus and Sirius, I looked mainly at the scene in the Shrieking Shack in PoA, because that scene is really packed full of things that, if you look deep enough, really give you a lot of info about the two, both separately and together. For fun fics like this, I don't go too deep into the characters - this is just me having fun, so their playful/mischievous sides are going to come out more prominently than any other traits I imagine them having. But sometimes other things sneak in there =P