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Delicious Irony (And Other Acquired Tastes): Chapter Six

Nov 06, 2006 13:34

Chapter seven is finally complete! There's just one little scene that I flat out hate, and I am playing around with it even as I type this (well, not as I type this because, you know, I can't type in two places at once, but you get what I'm saying) so hopefully I will be pleased with it soon and can then move on to chapter eight!

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yourssincerely November 8 2006, 03:27:41 UTC

What does devotchka mean? o_O Sorry if that's a stupid question.

*gasp* You're starting at chapter six? Bad! No! Go to chapter one! Ahhhh! All right, I am perhaps overreacting, but I never could do things out of order. If it works for you, then go right ahead! I am far too anal to read out of order.

I'm really glad that you see them as being "casual and boyish" - that's exactly what I was aiming for, and sometimes, I was afraid I might not be pulling that off exactly right, seeing as how I'm not a boy and could never understand those creatures enough to write them perfectly. So thanks very much :)

And I feel exactly the same - in crack!fic, it's fine to ignore Peter/make him amusingly stupid, but the rest of the time...well, at least don't ignore him, even if you can't be bothered to give him at least half a brain. And truly, I sympathize with those authors that want to make him stupid. But at the same time, he was a Marauder for a reason, give the guy some credit.

And I am going to shut up now - thanks for the review!

neverreal November 7 2006, 07:51:38 UTC

I'm loving this very much. It's great because neither Sirius nor Remus secretly fancy each other, which is really nice for a change. =]

yourssincerely November 8 2006, 03:29:47 UTC

I've read a couple of fics with this same basic plotline, and all of them had either Sirius or Remus (or both) secretly in love with the other, and so I decided to change it up and have some fun with it. Glad you like the change! Thanks for reviewing!

xrated13 November 7 2006, 10:59:51 UTC

That was brilliant! And you made them sound so smart! :) :) Awesome!

yourssincerely November 8 2006, 03:31:57 UTC

On occasion, the puppies can actually be intelligent ;) Remus's book smarts don't count - he's rather socially retarded, if you know what I mean.

Thanks for the review!

lejlkwiet November 7 2006, 20:18:41 UTC

Really really enjoying this fic! Laughed so much at some parts, something cheerful like this was just what I needed! Lovely characterizations, and your Sirius is wonderful. Completely insane but making sense in his own unique way. Hope to see more soon :)

yourssincerely November 8 2006, 03:38:03 UTC

I adore Sirius to pieces. He has quite an original perspective on matters and how they should be handled, and stupid as his solutions sound, they do make sense, in a very messed up sort of way. At least, that's how I've always imagined Sirius. The Sirius in my head is all sorts of interesting, which I'm sure you'll all get a chance to see as this fic progresses ;)

Thanks so much for your review!

aylaranzz November 9 2006, 19:54:17 UTC

I immensley enjoyed the Beatles reference in the last chapter! lol.

I'm really enjoying this so far. Sirius punching that Puff was great! Poor Remus is all worried. I can't wait for more.

yourssincerely November 10 2006, 03:06:33 UTC

I heart The Beatles. I don't know what made me think of the Marauders/Beatles comparison, but it seemed rather fitting.

Badass!Sirius greatly amuses me. I really wanted to make him punch somebody, and that's how it panned out. I'm glad you like it so far! Thanks so much for reviewing!