counterpoint; chapter four.

[casi_casi]

Title: Counterpoint
Chapter: 4 of 4
Characters: David Silva / David Villa; Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres; Steven Gerrard / Xabi Alonso
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: AU. Sorry about the delay; this past week was finals week.
Feedback > life. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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Comments

[theosakansun]

The very first paragraph of the Sernano part was a pretty accurate description of myself actually. I think I’m more alike Fernando than I previously had thought I was. It’s strange. Maybe that’s why I kinda recognize Fernando’s character from somewhere because he reminds me of myself? :P

Aaaaaw Fernando, I wish he didn’t need to be that afraid of losing Sergio because honestly, I doubt Sergio would dump him when I found out about Fernando’s true self. And I doubt Fernando would be a dull person if he’s just himself because even if his real self isn’t as much fun as the pretended self is, it’s always the real deal that wins.

sdfjgjkfdgkjkdjfg please let Sergio come back hsjkfkdfghjfd :’( Just as Fernando finally was starting to make a change, too D:

I know Stevie and Xabi’s relationship pretty much brought them more pain than joy but I still want them to get back together. My heart will forever weep if they don’t :(

He came home, to the emptiness and the silence, with no footprints, and the smell of Steven having disappeared

[casi_casi]

Oh, thanks so much! I'm so glad to hear that this is something you'll re-read, and I hope you get more from it the second time. I loved reading your comment; it's always nice to get a sense of what a reader was feeling when they were reading a story. :)

[sukha4]

Noooooo why are Sergio and Fernando the only couple who can't make it? ahhh it's too sad : ' (

[casi_casi]

I'm sorry! But thank you for reading it.

[annarr01]

no! sernando! :( awww
okaaay everything else i love and it's amazing :P im just letting my heart speak but seriosly, the whole fic is beautiful

[casi_casi]

Thanks so much! I'm sorry about the Sernando; I guess I'm a miniature sadist.

[katie_andrea]

Silva and Villa, i think the entire LJ world just wants them to end up together because they are perfect for each other - and they can't help it! They're so cute here in this chapter, and i'm just so happy that they were able to work things out in the end =)

Sernando - thank you for breaking my heart - that is just so cruel of you =( i hope Fernando learned something from this - and that is to appreciate things, people, and situations..i still hate it though they didn't end up together

i thought the Silvilla story would be the one who'll leave me sad but it's the Sernando one, i'm really sad though, really sad..

overall, what a great series huh? i like your way of writing..very creative!

*here's to hoping you do something like this again anytime soon*

[casi_casi]

Thanks very much for the lovely comment, though I'm sorry the Sernando made you sad! I definitely plan to writing more and soon. :)

[wh_mermaid]

I love your writing so much, I really do. You have an amazing gift in being able to create characters with so much depth to them and you don't need to use a lot of words to do it. Every time I read something of yours, I'm blown away by the detail and thought that you put into your writing- words aren't wasted in your works and they flow seamlessly together to paint your scenes, characters, the feeling, the emotions, and it just works so well. <3

This story was perfection. I love that not everyone got a happy ending because life isn't full of happy ending. These relationships are real and complex- there are small details and character flaws that cause the problems in the relationshipa and you've captured the reality of relationships; they're not all sunshine and roses.

I think this is the most seriously toned comment I've ever left anyone, lol. So I shall insert my silly fangirl flailing now: *flails*

I really do adore your work <3

[casi_casi]

Oh wow, such a generous comment. Thank you so, so much. I'm a little blown away here.

I'm indescribably glad that you like the detail I put into my writing, and the fact that not everyone got a happy ending here. Thank you again, your comment put a huge smile on my face.