counterpoint; chapter four.

[casi_casi]

Title: Counterpoint
Chapter: 4 of 4
Characters: David Silva / David Villa; Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres; Steven Gerrard / Xabi Alonso
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: AU. Sorry about the delay; this past week was finals week.
Feedback > life. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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[theosakansun]

The very first paragraph of the Sernano part was a pretty accurate description of myself actually. I think I’m more alike Fernando than I previously had thought I was. It’s strange. Maybe that’s why I kinda recognize Fernando’s character from somewhere because he reminds me of myself? :P

Aaaaaw Fernando, I wish he didn’t need to be that afraid of losing Sergio because honestly, I doubt Sergio would dump him when I found out about Fernando’s true self. And I doubt Fernando would be a dull person if he’s just himself because even if his real self isn’t as much fun as the pretended self is, it’s always the real deal that wins.

sdfjgjkfdgkjkdjfg please let Sergio come back hsjkfkdfghjfd :’( Just as Fernando finally was starting to make a change, too D:

I know Stevie and Xabi’s relationship pretty much brought them more pain than joy but I still want them to get back together. My heart will forever weep if they don’t :(

He came home, to the emptiness and the silence, with no footprints, and the smell of Steven having disappeared so quickly with the rest of him. It shouldn’t be like this, they should be together and happy :(

A century in a moment passed, and Xabi felt weak. He went to sit down by Steven, and could have sobbed when Steven lay a hand on his. fhgkkfjgkhfkkgffkjg!!! I don’t really know what to say even. It’s just too many emotions running wild and there’s happiness and sadness and a feeling of hopelessness too.

I don’t think I fully understood all heartbreak in this story up until now. I think everyone’s hurting, some more than others maybe, but they’re all in pain.

aaaaw the talk Villa and his father had :’) I hope Silva and Villa stay together!!

aaaaaw it didn’t really end happily for any of the couples now, did it? I loved this! This goes into my memories because I know I’ll need to reread it.

[casi_casi]

Oh, thanks so much! I'm so glad to hear that this is something you'll re-read, and I hope you get more from it the second time. I loved reading your comment; it's always nice to get a sense of what a reader was feeling when they were reading a story. :)