Last part of In The Flesh, cause it was a little long.

[carylic]

Comments

[chuffing]

Oh. Dear. God. I think I am in love with you. That was the best thing I have read in ages. I actually stopped working to read it all at once. I laugh, I whinged, I moaned along with them LOL. I adore this Draco. Must go pimp this NOW.

*hugs you and runs off like a complete nutter, arms flailing behind*

[carylic]

Lol, thanks. But the fact I had to break it up was annoying ...

[chuffing]

*shrugs* I thought it was done with the first half, so imagine my joy at seeing the second post. I clicked quicker than I knew was possible heh.

[dacro]

And against all the politically correct arguments about the person inside, and not to judge people by how they looked, beauty was almost always a sure winner when it came to being a requirement for lust.

oh I think that about sums it up! ;) wow! I got the the end and I wanted 10 more chapters. Great details. I loved how you made mention of what Lisa's voice sounded like, Emily flicking to the back of the book and treating Harry like a stranger each time and legacy of Draco's mother. wow.

Great scene in the 'room'. *drool* You have the gift of building tension, and I found myself holding my breath quite a few times. The way Harry pushes himself to take things 'just one step further' was spell-binding. *clap*

again, woah! (please write more)

[carylic]

Thanks :D And, er I hope you don't mean to write more for this. I kinda like the way it ended and left it as a one shot.

[dacro]

oh it was a great ending. I just loved the idea behind it so much, that I'd love to see more. ;)

[carylic]

Further note ... forgot to say 'sorry' about the one shot deal ...

[viridescence]

Woah! *pants* That was fabulous! More please?!?!

Draco's face didn't even blink, but his hand shook hard enough for the ice cubes to clink around in his glass.
Loved this line! Draco can be so transparent!

*grin*

[carylic]

Glad you liked it but sorry - one shot.

[__mintyfresh]

Oh, wow. This was good!

Harry did look at him this time, giving a small apologetic shrug. "I'd always hoped that you would fuck me."

I don't think it is possible for my jaw to drop any lower than it did when I read this line.
I know it says "done" but there has to me more of this brillance that you are willing to share. Please?

[carylic]

Everyone keeps asking for more, but sorry - one shot deal. But who knows, maybe somewhere along the line an idea will hit me (well that's a given, but I meant one that would suit this for a 'sequel')

[anang209]

Two words: Lurve-ly. Really, really enjoyed it. Will rec it to anyone who will listen.

I love "carrying a torch" H/D!

[carylic]

Thanks! Sadly, the carrying a torch comment gave me another idea for a different fic ... and not in the way you meant it :D