And against all the politically correct arguments about the person inside, and not to judge people by how they looked, beauty was almost always a sure winner when it came to being a requirement for lust.
oh I think that about sums it up! ;) wow! I got the the end and I wanted 10 more chapters. Great details. I loved how you made mention of what Lisa's voice sounded like, Emily flicking to the back of the book and treating Harry like a stranger each time and legacy of Draco's mother. wow.
Great scene in the 'room'. *drool* You have the gift of building tension, and I found myself holding my breath quite a few times. The way Harry pushes himself to take things 'just one step further' was spell-binding. *clap*
:D Well, I say it's a one shot, but these things are hard to judge. If ever a good idea for a sequel (or who knows, a prequel) hits me and I think it's good enough to at least semi-live up to this one ...
oh I think that about sums it up! ;) wow! I got the the end and I wanted 10 more chapters. Great details. I loved how you made mention of what Lisa's voice sounded like, Emily flicking to the back of the book and treating Harry like a stranger each time and legacy of Draco's mother. wow.
Great scene in the 'room'. *drool* You have the gift of building tension, and I found myself holding my breath quite a few times. The way Harry pushes himself to take things 'just one step further' was spell-binding. *clap*
again, woah! (please write more)
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I always beg for more when I fid a fic I love. Don't mind me.
*hug*
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good enough for me!
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