Last part of In The Flesh, cause it was a little long.

[carylic]

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[dacro]

And against all the politically correct arguments about the person inside, and not to judge people by how they looked, beauty was almost always a sure winner when it came to being a requirement for lust.

oh I think that about sums it up! ;) wow! I got the the end and I wanted 10 more chapters. Great details. I loved how you made mention of what Lisa's voice sounded like, Emily flicking to the back of the book and treating Harry like a stranger each time and legacy of Draco's mother. wow.

Great scene in the 'room'. *drool* You have the gift of building tension, and I found myself holding my breath quite a few times. The way Harry pushes himself to take things 'just one step further' was spell-binding. *clap*

again, woah! (please write more)

[carylic]

Thanks :D And, er I hope you don't mean to write more for this. I kinda like the way it ended and left it as a one shot.

[dacro]

oh it was a great ending. I just loved the idea behind it so much, that I'd love to see more. ;)

[carylic]

Further note ... forgot to say 'sorry' about the one shot deal ...

[dacro]

no need for sorry. It's your fic, baby! ;)

I always beg for more when I fid a fic I love. Don't mind me.
*hug*

[carylic]

:D Well, I say it's a one shot, but these things are hard to judge. If ever a good idea for a sequel (or who knows, a prequel) hits me and I think it's good enough to at least semi-live up to this one ...

[dacro]

yay! ;)
good enough for me!