Comments | carylic: Last part of In The Flesh, cause it was a little long.

carylic

Last part of In The Flesh, cause it was a little long.

Jun 11, 2004 19:46

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daisy_drabbles June 11 2004, 20:29:22 UTC

This was brilliant! And breaking it up really didn't interupt the flow any at all. The situation that brought them together was marvelous, and I love how you kept them held off from each other, veiling the conversation as a business proposal right to the end. And Hot. Very nicely Hot. Ending perfectly, though I have to admit I wouldn't mind (understatement) seeing more in this vein if the muse ever struck you again. :D

carylic June 11 2004, 22:05:28 UTC

Glad you liked it but it still only looks like aone shot no matter how many ppl seem interested for more

daisy_drabbles June 12 2004, 00:09:52 UTC

Which I have no problem with, cause really. This ended Marvelously. I was only saying ....

:D

__brokenvoid June 11 2004, 21:09:02 UTC

"Nasty, evil business man, taking advantage of a sweet, inebriated young hero. I feel I should grow a moustache, if only to be able to twirl the ends of it while laughing sinisterly."

Hehehe, that was by far my favourite line. This was amazing. I loved it!

carylic June 11 2004, 22:07:36 UTC

Thanks and yeah, quite a few ppl seemed to love that line :D

danbi June 12 2004, 02:31:31 UTC

Wow, what a treat! I really liked this one. The ending is great, lets people be imaginative. I thought it was really true to the characters as well. Wow, oh wow, I really liked it.

carylic June 12 2004, 02:49:57 UTC

Thanks :D this was 'Carylic's Opening Fic' ... first thing that ever went up ... bloody FF.Net though ...

danbi June 15 2004, 20:48:00 UTC

Hey, just wanted to let you know I wrote something at erised_diaries. It's PG-13 but I'm working on some other stuff. One is almost done and is pretty nice - the other is short and smutty. Will post both, at least to my own journal. Heh heh.

But the PG-13 one is there if you need something to read.

ashice_roses June 12 2004, 08:09:39 UTC

wow, what can I say. Great fic, you have an amazing talent to build suspension! The last scene was the best, I just loved it. I am still reeling from it! Thank you so much for giving me such a wonderful little(but long) story to read, with my favourite pairing.
*hugs*thank you!!
-ash

carylic June 13 2004, 02:25:55 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and I love the 'little(but long)' description :D

tanizard June 12 2004, 18:18:01 UTC

*incoherency*

*in a good way*

*hee. <3*

carylic June 13 2004, 02:30:24 UTC

Lol, ta. Hope you regain coherency :D